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  2. Any study of Aphra Behn is really a study of shifting disguises and political guesswork. She is remembered in history as the first woman to make a living by writing in English, all the way back in the seventeenth century. Few know that she became a writer while exploring her first intriguing career: Spy for the British crown. Fittingly for a spy, Behn was secretive and her reputed garrulity among friends did not extend to anything autobiographical for future generations to rely on. Most of what we know of her is uncertain, gleaned from the literature she left us. Her espionage career might have begun in 1659, when she was about nineteen years old. The death of Oliver Cromwell sent the bumbling Sealed Knot secret society into a flurry of activity on behalf of the Royalist cause. Her foster-brother Sir Thomas Colepeper and his half-brother Lord Strangford were caught up in covert activities. Behn would have been able to travel to France to liaise with Lord Strangford more easily than Colepeper, who was being watched. She also may have served as a living dropbox for letters exchanged between plotters. But true to the nature of spies and covert plots, no solid evidence of this role survives. Her presence in it is only hinted at by her relationships with others involved. A version of Behn’s life story says that she was one of the children of John Johnson, a gentleman appointed Lieutenant General of Surinam, a short-lived English colony in what is now Suriname, South America. In this tale, Johnson died during the transatlantic voyage to his appointment, which meant his widow and his children, including young Aphra, were temporarily stranded in South America. This tale is almost certainly false though. Crucially, there is no record of a Johnson destined for a high office in Surinam, nor any Johnsons among the recorded settlers of the colony. However, that Behn did go to Surinam in the 1660s is not in question. The descriptions of the colony in her most famous novel, Oroonoko, are too detailed for her to have gleaned them only by reading other people’s reports. In the other stories she wrote, Behn didn’t trouble herself much with research. Stories she wrote set in France and Spain are no different from stories set in England. The setting often remains a mere suggestion, but Oroonoko is different: It gives the impression of the author writing down what she heard and saw around her, lending it a reality that she clearly wasn’t achieving through meticulous research. The setting often remains a mere suggestion, but Oroonoko is different: It gives the impression of the author writing down what she heard and saw around her, lending it a reality that she clearly wasn’t achieving through meticulous research. It is how and why Behn ended up in Surinam that is up for debate. Her biographer, Janet Todd, argues that Behn went to Surinam as part of a spying mission for King Charles II. This would explain why, on her return to England, she had an audience with the king to “give him ‘An Account of his Affairs there,'” an incredibly unusual outcome for a young woman’s family trip to South America. Surinam was supposedly overrun with spies at the time, probably because a far-flung colonial outpost was a perfect place for any dissidents in Restoration Era England who had plans for seizing control of a colony or fomenting a revolution. She may have been there to spy on any number of brewing conflicts. The governor of Surinam at the time, Lord Willoughby, was absent, leaving a power vacuum filled by various personalities. This was also a time of “gold, glory, and God” and various people were reporting back to King Charles II about the possibilities of any and all of these plans succeeding. Spain had already grown immensely rich from riches found in North America, but England hadn’t struck gold yet. Many were taken in by promises of El Dorado, including Behn, who would find herself disappointed that Charles II was already tired of the empty promises of the mythical city. Behn was profoundly impacted by her trip to Surinam. Though she did have a mission to complete, with few friends and more time on her hands than usual, she began writing. Possibly she was already considering plays or translations as sources of income in case she could no longer engage in spy craft due to age, shifting political tides, or notoriety. She also had connections to the theater world back in England, and may have already been considering how to further insert herself in those circles. Interestingly, she does not seem to have been considering marriage as part of her future at all at this stage, though it would have been the thing to do for a woman her age in Restoration society. She found much inspiration in the social mobility colonists found in the Americas, especially Virginia, where transported criminals found themselves impossibly rich from tobacco and beaver hunting. Behn hated this sort of class mobility and frequently lampooned it in her work for the rest of her life. She also made time to meet the Indigenous population living near the English colony. Like many European colonists of her time, she found in the Surinamese a sort of pastoral innocence, and she carefully recorded her exchange of her garters for a set of feathers which she took with her back to England. Her work often reflected a paternalistic attitude toward any person of color. An avid reader, especially of pastoral romances like the works of dramatist Gauthier de Costes, seigneur de la Calprenède’s, Behn tended to see her own surroundings through that lens. When she transposed the reality of Surinam back into fiction, the very real political dramas took on the pastoral lens of the fiction she enjoyed. While in Surinam, she probably wrote her play The Young King, a tragicomedy of heroic lovers in Arcadian pastoral settings. It was written with an eye toward pleasing Charles II–he was known to love Spanish-style drama. Though the play wasn’t staged for at least fifteen years after her return to England, she never seems to have edited it–it retains youthful criticisms of power and privilege that she refused to engage in again later in life. Female spies were—and continue to be—positioned as fetishes and commodities, constantly sexualized and reduced to a roadblock to be overcome by the dominant male spy. While Behn was in Surinam, she almost certainly met William Scot, the exiled son of an executed republican. His father Thomas Scot had been a member of the House of Commons and instrumental in the trial and execution of Charles I. William also had political aspirations, and though he probably would have been safer somewhere further from English society, he was in Surinam, probably making deals and trying to find his way back into political influence. Rumor had it at the time that Behn and Scot were having an affair. He was married with a child, though living apart from them. The affair was remarked upon by their contemporaries in letters home, though Behn’s given name is Astrea, taken from the seventeenth-century French pastoral romance L’Astrée by Honoré d’Urfé. She later adopted the name as her pen name; she may have already been using it as a pseudonym in Surinam. The immensely long novel centers on a fictionalized pastoral idyll in France during the fifth century, where a young shepherdess and shepherd—Astrée and Celadon—fall in love. Celadon is a perfect lover, but Astrée is “a curious combination of vanity, caprice and virtue; of an imperious, suspicious and jealous nature, she is not at all the ideal creature of older pastorals.” It makes sense that Behn would choose such a codename. She would challenge many of the “superficial associations of such a name” throughout her life, and though a lot of her writing relied on pastoral imagery and tropes, she often challenged those as well. Behn returned to England in 1665. She gave her report of English affairs in Surinam to Charles II. What she was up to for the next year is unclear, though we know that she kept up with the ongoing dramas of the colony through the pamphlets that were published about it. Some of these intrigues found their way into Oroonoko, her novel published in 1688. The failed rebellion of the eponymous enslaved prince, Oronooko, was foretold in an unsuccessful assassination attempt against Surinam’s Governor Lord Willoughby. The would-be assassin, the troublesome Thomas Allin, was someone Behn may have reported on during her time there. He died by suicide rather than be executed for his attempt; her protagonist was executed instead. She must have made inroads in the political and theatrical spheres, because in 1666, Thomas Killigrew sent Behn to the Netherlands as a spy. Killigrew was the dramatist heading up the King’s Company troupe and secretly working in intelligence for the King. This was during the darkest point of the Second Anglo-Dutch War, so Behn probably only landed this precarious role because she had done good enough work in Surinam. Her mission on behalf of the English king was to meet with her old flame William Scot, who now claimed to have information for the Royalists about a Dutch-sponsored uprising in England. She was to assess what information he had and whether it was worth anything. Killigrew knew of their romance in Surinam and was happy to exploit it for the king’s gain. Behn was ill-equipped for this dangerous mission. Though adept at role-playing, she was somewhat naive. She was a bad judge of character and more easily fooled by false sincerity than someone undertaking a third espionage mission should have been. She was also quite talkative and would never be remembered as discreet. Unsurprisingly, she was not successful. Scot was hard to deal with, and Behn didn’t have the resources to succeed even if he had been helpful. They both asked for too much from their spymasters and received nearly nothing. It was a plight shared by all Royalist agents taking risks for the Crown. Behn returned to London in May 1667, having had the good fortune of missing the catastrophic Great Fire of London the year before, but with little else to show from her trip. Writing became an urgent necessity after her return from the Netherlands. Charles II was infamously stingy with payments to his spies, often simply not paying them at all. Behn’s stay in Antwerp had left her in immense debt, and she spent time in a London debtor’s prison before being released with a patron’s help. She had good handwriting, so she began copying manuscripts for fast money before looking toward the theater for her next adventure. On September 20, 1670, Behn had her theatrical debut: her play, The Forc’d Marriage, was staged by the Duke’s Company. Like many of her works, it was a tragicomedy that ends in two noblemen marrying commoners against their parents’ directives, a scandalous concept at the time. She would return to the concept of escaping a bad marriage numerous times in her work; her biographer Janet Todd assumes the repeating theme was inspired by Behn’s own bad luck in love. The women in Behn’s stories often live bleak lives, even when they’re removed to pastoral idylls. They are forced to manipulate and negotiate through places where men have all the power. Behn led a similar life working in the theater; calling her a whore would have been only a slightly lower insult than calling her a poetess at the time. Yet, it was threatening to men that this female writer was so popular. In an essay, Rutgers University professor Elin Diamond writes, The conflict between (as she puts it) her “defenceless” woman’s body and her “masculine part” is staged in her insistence, in play after play, on the equation between female body and fetish, fetish and commodity….Like the actress, the woman dramatist is sexualized, circulated, denied a subject position in a theatre hierarchy. Similarly, female spies were—and continue to be—positioned as fetishes and commodities, constantly sexualized and reduced to a roadblock to be overcome by the dominant male spy. Behn’s experience in both worlds would have led her to navigate them as only she could–an independent agent set on getting what was hers. ______________________________ Unruly Figures by Valorie Castellanos Clark is available via Princeton University Press. View the full article
  3. Another week, another batch of books for your TBR pile. Happy reading, folks. * Steve Cavanagh, Kill for Me Kill For You (Atria) “Explosive, game-changing reveals that, combined with an uncommon attunement to the central characters’ emotional arcs, make for a wild, deliciously satisfying ride.” –Publishers Weekly Sulari Gentill, The Mystery Writer (Poisoned Pen Press) “Gentill’s worthwhile novel is full of compelling characters, including doomsday preppers, online conspiracy theorists, and overzealous publishing agents. Recommended for readers who enjoy mysteries from Riley Sager, Ruth Ware, or Louise Penny.” –Library Journal Nova Jacobs, The Stars Turned Inside Out (Atria) “Jacobs elevates the death-in-the-workplace trope to staggering heights in this science-based thriller that fuses physics and philosophy in mindbending ways… Jacobs delves into subjects as deep as the nature of the universe and the space-time continuum and as quotidian as romantic love and professional jealousy, giving careful readers much to contemplate.” –Booklist Nicci French, Has Anyone Seen Charlotte Salter? (William Morrow) “Husband and wife writing duo Nicci French are always a must read, and their latest, Has Anyone Seen Charlotte Salter?, is one of their very best. Compelling, moving and beautifully written, it’s about how real people are affected by (and driven to) murder…. An absolute winner.” –Guardian Cynthia Pelayo, Forgotten Sisters (Thomas and Mercer) “This compelling mystery within a unique haunted-house story is told in gorgeous prose, with sympathetic, complicated characters who feel as if they could materialize off the page. Pelayo has given readers another can’t-miss novel, marked by its pervasive unease and riveting storyline. For fans of ghost stories that mine memory, fairy tales, and mystery, such as the works of Simone St. James, Jennifer McMahon, and Helen Oyeyemi.” –Library Journal Ron Corbett, Cape Rage (Berkley) “Corbett enhances his nail-biting plot with vivid depictions of the moody rural Washington State setting and convincing characterizations of cops and criminals alike.” –Publishers Weekly Gigi Pandian, A Midnight Puzzle (Minotaur) “Pandian triumphs again… with this fiendishly clever, intricately constructed whodunit. It’s another home run from a major talent.” –Publishers Weekly Alexia Casale, The Best Way to Bury Your Husband (Penguin Books) “A wife and her trusty frying pan fighting the patriarchy can elicit a silent cheer… Casale’s book goes beyond the statistics to tell four very human stories — morbid, funny and sadly relevant.” –The Washington Post Eric Rickstad, Lilith (Blackstone) “Rickstad delivers a second suspenseful thriller, one that reflects our politically divided times.” –Booklist Parker Adams, The Lock Box (Crooked Lane) “This taut, page-turner debut from Adams is perfect for fans of James Patterson and Jonathan Kellerman.” –Booklist View the full article
  4. If Chris Bohjalian were to write a memoir—or a manifesto on craft—it could be called: I was a teenage magician. It’s a history that has served him well. A master of misdirection, Bohjalian—the #1 New York Times bestselling author of more than twenty books including The Lioness and The Flight Attendant—occupies unique territory in the literary landscape. While his novels often incorporate crime, they aren’t often considered crime novels (which is why you’ll usually find them shelved in Fiction as opposed to Mystery). And yet Bohjalian considers crime his MacGuffin, or the pistol that marks an opening salvo. Case in point: While Bohjalian’s newest genre-bender, The Princess of Las Vegas (March 19, 2024; Doubleday), centers on a popular Diana impersonator simultaneously losing and finding herself in Sin City, it opens with a gunshot—and more bullets fly (and more bodies fall) before the final curtain comes down. It’s casino culture meets cryptocurrency meets organized crime on Nevada’s infamous strip, and everybody’s secrets will be laid bare in a high stakes game of survival that has the potential to become a royal mess. But the story is really about estranged sisters floundering in the wake of their mother’s (suspicious?) death. Crissy (aka Diana) and Betsy are forced to reconcile when Betsy—who recently adopted a surprisingly worldly teenage girl—follows her boyfriend from Vermont to Vegas, where they’ve both found employment in a lucrative bitcoin venture. The promise of a fresh start, however, is tempered by the reality that their new “business associates” hold all the cards … and can cash out their lives if they don’t fall in line with the family way. Now, Chris Bohjalian talks about the sleights of hand that add elements of magic and mystery to his transcendent tales. John B. Valeri: The Princess of Las Vegas, like many of your books, straddles genre lines (i.e., it may not be a crime novel but it’s a novel that contains crime). How do you conceptualize crime as a catalyst for storytelling – and what does the threat of (further) violence/death jeopardize here? Chris Bohjalian: Crime is often the MacGuffin for me, that element of a story that seems critical, but is actually a bit of storytelling misdirection. (I was a teenage magician, and so I love misdirection.) In some of my novels it figures more critically than in others: it’s more important to The Princess of Las Vegas than to The Guest Room, for instance, even though The Guest Room has rivers of blood in the first two pages, and plenty more later on. But I never viewed The Flight Attendant as a crime novel, even though it literally begins with a dead body in a bed. I always viewed that book as a story of a functional alcoholic with serious demons. In my mind, The Princess of Las Vegas is an exploration of two damaged siblings, and how they deal with their childhood traumas. But I also wanted to explore the meaning of Princess Diana, and why this remarkable woman is still in the zeitgeist decades after her death. (For the record, I never considered a novel about the Princess herself. I love to write “historical fiction,” but I couldn’t write “novelized history” about a woman whose children and husband are still alive. That feels unfair to them and her memory.) Now, as I dove deeper into the novel, Las Vegas loomed larger as a character. I’m fascinated by the city and its history. Most people are, even if they prefer not to admit it. And what might have been merely another MacGuffin in another novel grew more integral to the plot. To use a gambling term, it upped the ante for me. It got me excited, because the stakes grew ever higher. JBV: Crissy Dowling has reinvented herself as a Princess Diana tribute performer in Vegas after having escaped the childhood trauma(s) she survived in Vermont. What of the princess’s life (and death) resonates with her – and how is Chrissy able to both lose and find herself within Diana’s persona? CB: I think Diana was Crissy’s savior. I shudder to think where Crissy would be if she hadn’t begun channeling her inner Diana. Other than the fact they resemble each other, Crissy shares one thing with Diana, and that is what leads to the profound identification. And I think Crissy understands that the late Princess saved her. Her sister, Betsy, might not agree with that. But – on some level – Crissy views herself as another of the sick and the sad and the wounded who have been touched by the Princess, and, if not healed, made better. JBV: Speaking of Princess Diana: What drew you to explore the royal family and their enduring cultural significance – and how did you endeavor to balance an honest yet respectful commentary, knowing they’ve inspired endless fascination and reverence among so many? CB: That first decision I made was the best one: the book would not be historical fiction about the woman set at Kensington Palace or on a Mediterranean yacht. It would be about a wannabe princess, someone who has studied her but is not her. I must admit, there is so much about Diana I learned that I did not use in the novel, because the book is about two American sisters in Las Vegas, not the Royal Family. Still, I think I was drawn there for a variety of reasons, including my own interest in the Royals, my interest in Las Vegas, and the idea of marrying the two. I think it’s fascinating that there is a Princess Diana museum in Vegas. Alas, it opened in September 2022, after I had finished writing the novel. Still, I hope it’s an indication that my pairing has an unexpected logic. JBV: Crissy’s estranged sister, Betsy, and Betsy’s newly adopted teenage daughter, Marisa, are also POV characters (Crissy and Marisa in the first-person and Betsy in the third). Tell us about the appeal of this narrative structure. How did using multiple perspectives allow for both an organic sense of character development as well as the heightening of suspense and tensions? CB: I’m a fan of narratives with multiple perspectives – that Rashomon effect. I’ve used it (off the top of my head) in The Lioness, The Sandcastle Girls, The Flight Attendant, Secrets of Eden, and The Guest Room. The truth is, in real life, no two witnesses see one event the same way. Why not use that reality in fiction? And, as you observed correctly, it increases the tension, because readers can know things that a character doesn’t. JBV: Betsy unwittingly finds herself mixed up with members of organized crime when she follows her boyfriend to Sin City, where they’ve found employment in a burgeoning bitcoin enterprise. Share with us why Vegas, with its colorful past and ever-evolving present, presented itself as the ideal setting for a cautionary tale about the mob’s influence on the cryptocurrency business (which remains a mystery to many of us). CB: Las Vegas is that fiery meteor that shoots across all our skies at some point in our lives, and demands that we watch. It’s a fever dream of hope and desire. And while the city is known for many things, crime is certainly a part of its DNA, and has been since it was founded. My apologies to the teams in tourism there, but let’s face it: it was a city mayor who helped create a mob museum in Vegas. Organized crime is a part of – and I love your use of this expression – “its colorful past.” I’m not sure if or when cryptocurrency will become big in Vegas or a currency on casino floors. And most of us barely understood cryptocurrency. So, crypto is – to use that word again – a MacGuffin. It’s a basis for possible next-generation criminality and corruption. But to enjoy the novel, you don’t need to know anything at all about crypto. Moreover, Vegas is at once ahead of the curve and behind it. It’s cutting edge and old school at the same time. It’s always changing. So, I set the novel in the summer and fall of 2022, because I needed a marker that wouldn’t change. I have no idea the role that crypto will play in the city, or in all our lives, in five or ten years. JBV: Like crime (organized or other!), history also informs many of your stories. Why is it important to look at the past in contextualizing the present – and how does your Armenian heritage factor into this desire to enlighten readers as you entertain them? CB: One of the most quoted lines from any of my novels is this one from The Sandcastle Girls: “But history does matter. There is a line connecting the Armenians and the Jews and the Cambodians and the Bosnians and the Rwandans.” We know that fiction engenders empathy and it can teach history. (I suspect that perhaps millions of people first learned about the Armenian Genocide from The Sandcastle Girls and the publicity around the novel.) I fear that a lot of Americans know too little about history, and if you don’t understand the past, well. . . We know how that goes. We repeat mistakes and we do that with far more cataclysmic consequences. So, yes, as a novelist, I want to entertain. But as a human being, I hope to share some of the things I’ve learned. JBV: In addition to being a novelist, you are also an accomplished playwright and screenwriter. While some might argue that writing is writing, each of these formats requires a distinct skillset (understanding of dialogue, direction, story structure, etc.). Tell us about the disparities and similarities of these disciplines. How can working in one area open up unexpected channels into the others? CB: I’ve written screenplays and teleplays, but I’m not an accomplished screenwriter. Of the three movies and the TV series that sprang from my novels, I wrote. . .nothing for the screen. Those plaudits belong to other writers. I have, however, had three plays that I am really proud of, including The Club, which had its world premiere at the George Street Playhouse just last month. Two of my plays were original stories and one was an adaptation of my novel, Midwives. And one thing I have learned is this: it is a hell of a lot easier to write a new play than it is to adapt an existing novel for the stage. Writing the Midwives play was much harder than writing Wingspan or The Club. The reason is pretty simple. A novel, by design, can be big and unwieldy and you have dozens of settings and scenes and characters. A play has to have a lot fewer. It is not less profound or complex than a novel, but you know your parameters (not limitations) going in. Also, a play has a cast and crew to solve a lot of problems the playwright hasn’t. I bow before all of the people in theatre who have dramatically elevated my work there. JBV: You refer to yourself as the “3rd most talented artist in a family of 3”—which includes your wife, photographer Victoria Blewer, and daughter, Grace Experience, an actor who has also narrated several of your books. What has been the importance of curiosity and creativity in your home – and how has watching your wife and daughter pursue their art emboldened your own approach to craft, assuming it has? CB: Lord, the two of them are so much more talented than I am – and in much harder fields for artists. The fact they do with their lives what they want is inspiring. I have always depended on my wife as my first reader, but now she is joined by our daughter. I depend on them and my editor, Jenny Jackson. (Jenny is also a brilliant novelist herself – Pineapple Street.) As my wife once said to me, when I was pushing back against a criticism, “Wouldn’t you rather hear it from me than the New York Times?” (Answer? Yes.) In any case, I love that as a playwright and novelist I have gotten to work with Grace Experience. And I love that – since we were eighteen years old – my lovely bride has been candid with me about almost every word I have written. View the full article
  5. Who is a lady going to call if she’s been wronged by an insufferable rake in Victorian England? If the lady is the main character in a historical romance, a lady’s reputation—and the reader’s favorite tropes—call for the FPI. The Fictional Private Investigator. Unlike PIs in contemporary crime fiction, the FPIs of historical romance do not sit outside a cheating man’s house in a beat-up Ford peeing in a bottle. Instead, they have a backstory that leaves them flawed and brooding, usually in possession of a small fortune or at least enough money to make a good match, and with muscular forearms. (That last part is just my humble opinion.) My latest release, The Love Remedy, features such a man who is a single father and deliciously grumpy to boot. You’re welcome. One reason authors who write British-set historical romances rely on our FPIs, is that London’s Metropolitan Police Force, responsible for prevention of crime and apprehension of criminals, only came into being after the Regency; the era in which the bulk of historical romance novels take place. The police force as we know it was introduced in 1829—a mere twelve years before the events in my early-Victorian set series begin. The rank of Detective was not created until 1842, the year my first book is set. I could, of course, fudge the timeline a bit and give the Met’s detectives a little more experience, but then we confront the second reason romance authors prefer our FPIs. No one liked the cops. The idea of a city-wide police department was not a popular one in the 1830s. Many in London considered them a threat to civil liberties. This fear was justified when those first ten years the primary use of the police force was to “keep the peace” or, in other words, crowd control. The bulk of police action was against crowds who gathered to advocate for political reforms such as universal suffrage (For men. For women? Not so much.). In Regency-set historical romances, an FPI was also preferable to the Bow Street Runners. While fictional liberties can and are taken in the portrayal of this private force, the Runners were thief takers without governmental oversight; men who received a fee for each criminal at large they brought to jail. In a romance this is awfully heroic. In real life? Not so much. Over in the colonies—sorry—in America during the early- to mid-1800’s, centralized police departments were also unpopular. In many large cities, folks were spontaneously deputized, leading to justice in some corners and mayhem in others. Obviously, not all sheriffs were hero material for the author whose novels chronicle the love lives of those men called by the gold rush or women who braved all manner of danger to make a new life out West. Even if the author keeps their stories set in the East, say New York City, police still aren’t sympathetic. Ever heard of the New York City police riot? In 1857 violence broke out between two competing forces, the NY Municipal Police Force, and the Metropolitan Police Force. Not so alluring, the specter of police men coming to fisticuffs and interfering in each other’s cases. For those historical romance authors whose stories are American-set, there is an actual historical alternative to the questionable public lawman. The questionable private lawman. The Pinkerton Detective Agency, still in existence, was founded in 1850. In the beginning, Pinkerton agents were used in the same spirit as Metropolitan police in England. The oligarchs of the day hired Pinkerton agents to infiltrate unions and undermine the budding American labor movement. They have a kinder historical reputation than they deserve, however, because of the success attributed to them in protecting Lincoln from assassination. The first couple of times. Indeed, the first recorded woman detective, Kate Warne, was a Pinkerton employee and one of the agents credited with foiling the first assassination attempt on Lincoln before he reached office. Later, during the civil war, Pinkerton agents were part of the “secret service” of agents overseen by the then War Office —precursors to the US Secret Service. The USSS is charged with protection of the president as well as their original purpose, to stamp out counterfeit currency. Pinkerton agents to this day have a reputation for being anti-union. In 2022 it’s reported that a Pinkerton agent infiltrated the movement to unionize Starbucks employees. Or, maybe, they were an adolescent girl posing as a Pinkerton to justify spending an inordinate amount of time in the ubiquitous coffee shop. In other words, while most historical romance authors conduct exhaustive research into the socio-economic, political, and fashion trends in the period in which they write, they are also charged with creating sympathetic romantic heroes and heroines. This is why the FPI is so vital to any historical romance that involves a crime and the impetus of what I call “the duke conundrum.” Readers, editors, and publishers would like a historical romance with a duke in the title and on the cover, please. Never mind there were only twenty-five ducal houses in 1812, including the dukedom of Wellington, created by the King specifically for the hero who defeated Napoleon at the battle of Waterloo. Slim pickings for an island full of beautiful, kind-hearted milk maids who long for men with all their teeth, were free of venereal disease, and bathed more than once a fortnight. Hence, historical romance authors are expert at presenting the outlier. We manage to find a scrap of evidence suggesting a duke might possibly be an early consumer of tooth powder. We conjure an earl, based on a murky historical figure, who’s defining characteristic is his unwillingness to profit from the sugar trade of the West Indies. Finally, for those of us who cannot contort our policemen (the first policewoman in the UK, Edith Smith, didn’t appear on the scene until 1915, and even then, was limited to arrests involving only women) into sympathetic love interests, we gift readers with the presence of an FPI to catch a killer, save the day, and marry the girl (or guy. Yes, there were same sex relationships in the 1800’s, but this is a whole ‘nother topic.) So, when it comes to historical detectives, give us romance authors a bit of grace. We walk a fine, fine line between history and romance. Lucky for us, FPI’s are there to bridge the divide. *** View the full article
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  7. In The Hunter, her ninth novel, Irish-American author Tana French takes us back to the small West Ireland village that she introduced in The Searcher. Retired detective Cal Hooper has made a home in Ardnakelty at the foot of the mountain, away from police cases and the city bustle. It’s a blazing hot summer, and while farmers worry about their crops, Cal’s life seems to have settled in a peaceful groove. His relationship with local Lena is going strong; meanwhile Cal keeps a watchful eye over teenage neighbor Trey, his now trusted carpentry assistant. But Cal’s makeshift family comes under threat when Trey’s father, Johnny, marches back into town with a scheme to find gold on local land and a sleek London millionaire in tow. Readers jonesing for the tightly plotted procedurals of French’s Dublin Murder Squad series should adjust their expectations. The Hunter, like The Searcher before it, is a slow burn. But it may be French’s best novel yet. The myriad narrative skills the author has honed in her eight previous novels are on full display here, immersing the reader into a deeply atmospheric, character-driven tale. At times poignant and others hilarious, The Hunter delivers a taut, intelligent examination of loyalty, instinct, and community. French masterfully excavates the secrets we keep for love or revenge and explores the lengths we go to to protect our family, be it blood or chosen. I had the thrill of speaking with Tana French over Zoom. We discussed her characters, her creative process, the ethics of writing the detective as hero, the joys of Irish banter, and much more. Jenny Bartoy: Where did you get the idea for The Hunter’s premise, about finding gold in Ireland? Tana French: My last book, The Searcher, was basically mystery software running on western hardware. I’d been reading westerns and thought many of the western tropes would map really well onto the west of Ireland. There’s a lot in common in setting, that sort of wild beauty that demands a lot of physical and mental toughness. And there’s a sense of place that’s so removed from the centers of power, both culturally and geographically, that anyone who wants to create a functioning cohesive society [is] going to have to make their own rules. I felt, when I finished The Searcher, that there were more Western tropes to play with in that west of Ireland setting, and the first one that sprang to mind was the “gold in them thar hills” trope. It doesn’t sound like a very Irish thing, but it’s true what Johnny says in the book: there have been a ton of ancient gold artifacts found in Ireland, and there have been many gold rushes over the centuries. So it didn’t seem like a particularly implausible thing to happen. Cal and Trey’s relationship at the end of The Searcher got left at quite an interesting point where they have built the foundation of a solid relationship but they haven’t had time for it to set firm. I thought, what would happen if something came in to disrupt this delicate balance? And the obvious thing was Trey’s absent dad, Johnny, who’s been off in London somewhere. He seemed like exactly the kind of guy who would come in with some big get-rich-quick scheme that might or might not be legit. And that just added up with the gold trope. JB: In The Hunter, instead of a single point-of-view (POV) narrative focused on Cal Hooper’s experience, this book is told in three POVs: Cal, his lover Lena, and his protégé Trey. In the Dublin Murder Squad series, you changed the single narrator in each book. How did this expansion, rather than lateral shift, in narrative perspective change things for you as a storyteller? TF: That was the scary part with this book because I had never done [multiple points of view] before. But I’ve discovered that as a writer, I’m really only happy when I’m a little bit outside my comfort zone. I like doing things where I feel like I have to learn on the fly and just pick it up as I go along. So this definitely satisfied that instinct! But also it felt like a very different kind of book, in that The Searcher was about one guy’s journey: Cal coming to this little village looking for peace and obviously not really finding it. But The Hunter is about a pseudo family relationship between Cal and Lena and this sort of semi-feral kid whom they’re trying to turn into a good human being. And because it is about this family and the ways in which it comes under threat, when Johnny and his British millionaire and his gold scheme arrive in the townland, the book needed to be from the perspectives of the whole family. It couldn’t just be one person’s POV; it had to be how the three fit into each other, how the dynamic reflected and rippled back between those three people. JB: Did you enjoy splitting up the narrative perspectives in the end? TF: It was hugely enjoyable. I had a lot of fun especially writing Trey, because she’s definitely an odd kid. She’s grown up in this village who has no time for her or any of her family. Her father is even less use when he’s there than when he isn’t. Her mother does her best, but she’s basically used up by just keeping everybody alive and functioning. And so Trey has been figuring it out for herself up until Cal and Lena came on the scene. And this has led her to have quite an odd approach to the rest of the village, to morality, to the way she goes about things she wants. And that’s a lot of fun to write. I find that characters are the most fun to write when they’re somehow in transition, when they’re moving from one stage of life to another, from one viewpoint to another. Trey at 15—that’s a hugely transitional point. You’re starting to move away from a child’s perspective where everything is quite black and white, quite single-minded, you’re consumed by one thing at a time, but you can’t really hold multiple poles and nuances and layers in your head at once, towards a more complex, more mature viewpoint. And she does go through that transition basically in the course of the book. And that was one of the most fun things to write. JB: Cal, Lena, and Trey are somewhat external to the village community. In the first book, this draws them together. But in this one, they’re each drawn out of their comfort zone and toward the village. Doing what must be done forces them out of the boundaries they’ve labored to set for themselves. Did that lead to any surprises for you as their creator? TF: Yes, along the way, very much so. The Searcher had been about an outsider, but The Hunter is exactly as you say, it’s about people who are on the periphery. They’re not exactly outsiders. They’re not exactly insiders. Lena by her own choice has cut herself off from the village to some extent, as much as she can; Trey because she’s from this family that nobody even wants to acknowledge; and Cal because he just moved there a few years ago. But they’re not really outsiders, in that they are a part of this network of relationships that’s within the village. And that’s kind of a powerful place to be, because you’re not bound by the place’s rules in the way that a full insider would be. You’re not under an obligation to it, you don’t feel the pressure in the same way. But you do have a certain amount of influence, a certain amount of power, and at different points in the book, they all choose to use that power in very different ways. But for Lena in particular, it came with surprises. My editor is a genius and started asking questions about Lena’s perspective. And I suddenly went, oh my God, Lena is going to be blown away and delighted and proud and conflicted about the fact that Trey is basically giving the finger to everything about this place in a way that Lena herself never found an opportunity to do. So that’s going to be huge for her. I went back and reshaped it all with this in mind for her. JB: You get to flex your comedy chops in this book. There’s always humor in your books but this one had some hilarious one-liners and laugh-out-loud exchanges in the pub. Is humor a natural kind of writing for you, or more technical? And what kind of research did you do to write these scenes so convincingly? TF: Oh, I had to make a huge sacrifice for this kind of prep, of going to the pub! The Irish wit and humor and quick banter—I know this is a cliché; I know that Ireland has a reputation for this, but it is true. It’s one of the major currencies. Here the ability to go quickfire back and forth with your friends shows everything from hierarchy to affection to conflict. Everything is filtered through this lens of humor. That’s how they say, “I love you, man.” The operational mode for everyone in these settings is just to slag each other and throw these lines back and forth in this fast game of squash. So it was huge fun to write, because if you’ve been down the pub a bunch of times and if you have these rhythms and this humor in your head, you can just hit “play” mentally on those characters and let them keep going. JB: It was great fun to have these humorous breaks amid heavier themes. Your novels feature complex, psychologically astute plots. They tend to rely on characters’ impulses, instincts, and empathy and involve so many twists and turns. What is your process for plotting? How do you organize your writing? TF: Organization is, anyone who knows me will tell you, my weak point. I’m not good at this stuff. But I am good, I think, at characters. I come from an acting background. So for me, the natural thing is to see characters as three-dimensional as possible and to try to bring the reader to the point where they’re seeing this world through the characters’ fears and needs and biases and objectives. So that’s where I start from. I know there are writers who don’t work like this—I have friends who have every chapter plotted out and every beat mark before they start writing. But for me all the action springs from character, so it means that I can’t really structure in advance. I need to get to know the characters a bit before I understand their interactions and their dynamics. So I start with a basic premise, a main character, and a setting. And I kind of dive in and write for a while and things sort of develop like a Polaroid as I go. And this makes for a lot of rewriting, but it is the only way that works for me. And I kind of hope that because stuff has taken me by surprise all the time—like, I’ll be two thirds of the way to a book and go, oh my God, that’s who did the murder!—I hope some of that [spontaneity] comes across to the reader, the sense of things coming out organically. JB: Yes, it definitely does! Many books, TV shows, and films that historically have glorified police work are now turning more critical or at least nuanced. Has that trend affected your approach in writing crime novels? I think the mystery genre needed to start questioning that whole viewpoint that the detective is intrinsically heroic. TF: I definitely think that it’s a good movement within the mystery genre, to acknowledge that the detective’s point of view is not the only one, and is not necessarily the crucial one, and is not necessarily the heroic one. Because that’s, of course, where the genre started to a large extent—the detective as a hero who will reimpose order on society after the chaos caused by murder, and that detective is on the side of truth and justice. And many of those books are great, they’re wonderful. But I think the mystery genre needed to start questioning that whole viewpoint that the detective is intrinsically heroic. There have always been flawed detectives, with the bottle of whiskey in the drawer and the ex-wife who hates him and the tortured past, but that’s a different thing. That’s a detective being flawed, but the role’s still being heroic. And I think it’s only recently that there’s more of a drive towards the idea that the role itself is flawed and is dangerous, and is not intrinsically heroic, and comes with dangers built in. In The Witch Elm, that was one of the things I really wanted to do, because I realized that my first six books were all from the detective’s point of view. It was all about seeing the investigation from the perspective of somebody for whom it was a source of power, and a source of triumph, and a source of reimposing order. And that is not the only or the most important viewpoint in any investigation. There are also people for whom this is not a source of power, or of reordering the world, it is the opposite. It’s having your power taken away from you, having your life overturned, having everything smashed around you in ways that you may never be able to reconstruct. In The Witch Elm, the narrator tries at one point kind of pathetically to be the detective, but he’s also the victim, the suspect, the witness, all of those other viewpoints I thought were just as important and needed a voice. In The Searcher and The Hunter, Carl is a retired detective. He’s taking early retirement from Chicago PD, for that reason. In The Searcher, he says something about having realized that one of them, either he or the job, or both, cannot be trusted. And he doesn’t know which it is. He’s left the job behind and is trying to reject the whole notion of himself as detective when that is suddenly demanded of him again, and then it becomes a kind of crisis of conscience. And it’s the same here in The Hunter where people want to position him as a detective, as not a detective, as a tool for detectives, or as a tool against detectives. Being on that side of the law has become a much more complex thing, within the mystery genre. I think this was not just good, but really necessary to examine the moral complexity not of the individual character, but of the entire concept of detecting. JB: I do feel like we’re getting more variety in literary crime fiction, which is exciting. On a related note, you’ve previously written about cops on the job, but in these latest novels, as noted, Cal is retired. What kind of challenges do you encounter in writing mysteries when the sleuth doesn’t have access to institutional resources? TF: That was actually one of the most fun things about writing both The Searcher and The Hunter. Because I was trying to reexamine, what is it morally, mentally, emotionally to be a detective? What does it mean to people? And Cal is in this position where all those trappings have been stripped away. At several points in both books he’s going, if I were still on the job, I could have somebody dump this person’s phone, I could track this, I could pull info on every single suspected witness I’ve got, I could look at the forensics, and now I have nothing. So is he still a cop? Does he even want to still be a cop without any of the accoutrements, without any of the artillery, that are in a cop’s armory? He has none of that. But he still does have whatever instincts and skills he’s built up on the job. And that isn’t actually something he wants to have, he was trying to leave all that behind. That was the most interesting part of writing it, because on a technical level, it means he just goes and talks to people, and he can do it in slightly more subtle ways, he has a little bit more experience questioning people. But what’s the relationship between the individual and his sense of himself as detective? That becomes core to it. And that was one of the reasons I wrote a retired cop, rather than one that was still on the job and having doubts, which would also have been interesting. Because, with all the physical trappings stripped away, you get to see the direct relationship between him as an individual and what’s left of the detective in him—what are the tensions between those things? JB: I noticed that you avoid digital technology in this novel. Your characters mention Netflix and TikTok in passing, and they use phones sporadically, but they’re not googling for evidence or going down Facebook rabbit holes. Tell me about this narrative choice. TF: Technology is really boring to write about! There are some writers who can make conversations via text message leap off the page and make them vivid and interesting, but I like characters being face to face. And so luckily, with the characters I’ve got, that was actually a fairly natural choice, because these are people in a milieu where they’re going to go see each other. They’re going to talk face to face. Trey in particular doesn’t have a phone yet at this stage because her mother hasn’t been able to afford to buy one. So that made it much easier to go, alright, the main form of communication is not going to be phones and email. They’re living in a place where people assume that if you want to talk to somebody, you’re probably going to meet them down the pub. And I thought that technology would have gotten in the way of the character interactions. I’m worried about this, because I know that more and more interaction is, in fact, on screen and via text. What do I do? Do I go with that and try to find a way to make it interesting, or am I going to keep dodging Snapchat for the rest of my career? I’m not sure. So far I’m just dodging Snapchat, everybody’s just going to go meet up! So much of our interactions is when you look at somebody, when you see their movements, when you listen to the tone of their voice, when you catch the tiny nuances. So much nuance lies in the face to face. And I think real-life interaction is being impoverished by the fact that less and less face-to-face interaction happens. But I’m not going to do it in my books, because it would impoverish them too. JB: Your novels make beautiful use of setting, almost as a character. In The Searcher the mountain felt alive. Here in The Hunter, it’s the weather, oppressively hot with an apocalyptic sort of overtone, but also the townland which acts and reacts as a cohesive unit. How do you approach setting and atmosphere as narrative elements? TH: The Hunter in particular, but The Searcher as well, are very different from my earlier books, because the early ones are set in cities. And these two are rural, many of the characters are farmers. So for them, the land and the heat wave in The Hunter aren’t just atmosphere, these are crucial practical things that alter their lives on a very concrete level. The heat wave isn’t just, oh my god, it’s boiling, let’s go to the park and get ice cream—it’s a threat to their livelihoods. A heat wave like that messes with your feed for the winter; it messes with next year’s lamb crop. It has a knock-on effect in farming that lasts a long time and can threaten the farm’s very existence. This puts a lot of the characters in a position where they’re willing to listen to Johnny’s get-rich-quick scheme, which normally they wouldn’t have even given him the time of day. Normally they’d have laughed him out of the pub with that nonsense. But they’re made vulnerable by this heat wave. So the weather and the land and the terrain aren’t just setting and atmosphere; they play a solid role in the plot. JB: In The Searcher, Trey longed for the brother who’d disappeared. Here in The Hunter Trey wishes her father, who’s reappeared, would go away—sort of an opposite desire. Trey’s preference for estrangement feels so realistic. Family estrangement is a reality—and a choice—for many, but it remains taboo culturally. Reconciliation is usually encouraged or expected, and this trope shows up a lot in books, movies, TV. How did you navigate these difficult family dynamics without making Trey petulant? “There are situations where the only closure is via division, via literally closing that door forever.” TF: There is this expectation that closure or a happy ending must involve reconciliation in some way with your blood family. And I think it’s ridiculous, because that’s not how the reality works. There are situations where the only closure is via division, via literally closing that door forever. And there are situations where reconciliation would do more damage than healing. I had to be very careful so it didn’t just seem like a teenager going, well, my dad went off and left us, now he can get stuffed if he thinks he’s walking back into my life — which at the beginning of the book, there is a certain element of that, to the point where Trey blames Johnny for her brother’s loss. But gradually, that sense deepens, the more she gets to know him, the more mature and in-depth and complex that need to separate herself from him becomes. And she reaches a point where she’s only willing to maintain that connection, because she needs it in order to effect another form of revenge. She comes to the realization that her real family unit doesn’t in fact include Johnny in any way. She’s constructed her own family unit with Cal and Lena, and in other ways with her mother and siblings. And I thought that was a much more realistic and nuanced take on things than just going, well, he’s blood, you must all be happy ever after, or in some way, damaged by the loss. Because frankly, I don’t think Trey is damaged by her father being out of her life. She may be traumatized by the things he did along the way, but she’s not traumatized by him being gone because she, as an individual, has made her choices and constructed her family unit. And that is what I hope saves her from being a petulant teenager going, I hate you. This is coming from strongly thought-through choices, and from sacrifices that she’s been willing to make for this new sort of family. JB: Before we sign off, I have to ask: what’s next for you? TF: Well, to my deep surprise, this seems to be turning out to be a trilogy, which is just not what I thought. I thought The Searcher was a standalone! But it doesn’t feel like either the character arcs or the thematic arcs are really complete. So it seems like I’m writing the third in a trilogy about this village, and these people, and all the layers and stories and tensions and dynamics stored up there. I didn’t expect that. I’m always worried because I don’t plan in advance—what if I dive in there and there’s no book and the threads never tie up? But fingers crossed. It’s always been okay so far. View the full article
  8. Remember Pizzagate? In 2016, a conspiracy theory that high-ranking Democrats were running a pedophile ring out of a D.C. pizzeria compelled a man to open fire inside the restaurant in an attempt to rescue the imprisoned children, who didn’t exist. The story dominated headlines for five minutes before fading into the category of “well, that happened.” The bamboozled gunman, Edgar Maddison Welch, was sent to jail and mostly forgotten, his identity blurring into an avatar for a certain set of social anxieties—that liberalism breeds perversion, that politicians lie, that modern life is emasculating. Any larger lessons which Pizzagate may have held for society were swiftly buried in the trash heap of yesterday’s news. Something that gets lost in our conversations about ‘unprecedented times’ is that many of our cultural uproars have happened before, often within our own lifetimes. I was born in 1985 during the rise of the ‘Satanic Panic,’ a phenomenon where people all over the country started to believe a conspiracy that daycare providers were committing Satanic ritual abuse on children. The hysteria can be traced back to the 1980 book Michelle Remembers by psychiatrist Lawrence Pazder. Pazder used the now discredited technique of ‘memory recovery therapy’ to spread a story that his patient (and later wife) Michelle Smith had been abused as a child at the hands of an underground Satanic organization. There was no evidence that any of Smith’s ‘recovered’ memories were real, but the book was a hit. Smith appeared on Oprah and stoked nation-wide fears that daycare providers were Satanic pedophiles. Looking back, it’s easy to connect the Satanic Panic to social anxieties over feminism threatening the traditional family unit. The increase of women in the workplace had increased the need for day care, shaping a community landscape in which children were being raised by strangers. This moral panic coincided with a key time in television history when the news was transitioning from the realm of sober information dissemination to that of entertainment, thanks in part to the abolishment of the FCC fairness doctrine in 1987. The fairness doctrine had required news outlets to present both sides of an issue for balanced coverage. Now, outlets could skip the boring bits of measured and fact-checked counterpoints in their reporting. And in a bewilderingly complex modern world, the notion of a secret, ancient conspiracy being the source of all evil held immense appeal to viewers. in a bewilderingly complex modern world, the notion of a secret, ancient conspiracy being the source of all evil held immense appeal… America’s Puritan settlers believed in a ‘world of wonders’ in which God and Satan meddled directly in everyday people’s lives like an ongoing chess game. The stakes of such a game could rapidly escalate into hysteria as people accused each other of being on the devil’s side, most famously exemplified by the Salem Witch Trials of 1692-1693. The lure of the moral panic is two-fold: a deep desire to purify society through scapegoating, and the irresistible drama of a witch hunt. What may begin with the earnest goal of rooting out evil becomes a grotesque and twisted form of entertainment, with very real consequences for the individuals wrapped up in it. In the case of the Satanic Panic, innocent pre-school teachers like the McMartin family in California were arrested and dragged through years of humiliating and expensive trials. The McMartins were eventually acquitted, but their business was destroyed, and their name would forever be associated with a child abuse scandal—if anyone remembered them at all. By the time I was a teenager in the late 90’s era of bubblegum pop and Beanie Babies, the dark madness of the Satanic Panic felt like a surreal, forgotten dream. When ‘fake news’ became a hot button issue during the 2016 presidential election, it was treated as a product of the internet, as if we hadn’t gone through an identical phenomenon before Facebook existed. In a culture where current events are served up as disposable entertainment, the recent past may as well be ancient history. Most of us know what it’s like to be a consumer of news-as-entertainment. It’s addictive, it’s bad for you, and it’s queasily delicious. During April and May of 2022, I gorged myself on the Johnny Depp vs. Amber Heard defamation trial. Heard was a perfect target for Puritan moral panic with her bisexuality, the vixen-like roles she tended to be cast in, and the unnerving, almost supernatural quality of her beauty (Heard’s face is popularly thought to be a 91.85% match to the ‘Golden Ratio’). I watched the televised court proceedings every day as if it were a thrilling limited series. As I became swept away by the entertainment value of the trial, the truth that was supposedly being litigated seemed less and less important. The case for Heard’s victimhood was lost amid Depp’s antics, her team’s terrible legal strategy, and Heard’s own abysmal performance on the stand. The show of the trial eclipsed its function so totally I felt that watching it had left me with a worse grasp on the truth than someone who hadn’t tuned in at all. After the trial was over, more details about Depp’s alleged abuse emerged, but by then I was, frankly, over it. While this cultural practice of scapegoating-as-entertainment certainly leaves a nasty taste in the mouth, to criticize it falls into the trap of providing even more fodder for Puritanical outrage. It would be tempting, for instance, to issue a fiery sermon condemning anyone who gets any relish out of someone else’s public humiliation (the term ‘guilty pleasure’ is glaring evidence of the Puritan genetic code still present in our cultural DNA). But heaping more shame upon shame doesn’t seem like an effective way out of this trap to me. It would only continue the cycle in which we instigate witch hunts, enjoy doing it, then shame ourselves for our enjoyment. We would promise not to do it again but forget that promise as soon as the next juicy news item drops about someone doing something bad. My new novel Rainbow Black is about a young girl whose parents are targeted amid the Satanic Panic like the real life McMartins. It was important to me to center the story around a victim of hysteria, rather than a consumer of it. I wanted to explore the life-long trauma that our unlucky scapegoats carry with them long after the media machine has moved on. What happens to these people once their entertainment value has been sucked dry and we discard them like trash? As consumers, the rush of excitement over the next Satanic Panic can be enough to erase our memory that we went through all this before, and it only made us sick. The only way out of our toxic Puritan cycle is to remember that the people at the center of our moral panics aren’t representations of our sins. They are, simply and profoundly, people. *** View the full article
  9. As a writer of narratives, I’m leery of them. Especially historical ones. I’m not skeptical of events; I’m skeptical of wording and connective tissue. Of the clean causality. Take the St. Valentine’s Day Massacre. (Seven men murdered in a garage, no one was ever convicted). Because speculating on whodunits is great fun, and because politicians at the time did what they do—spun the events to their advantage—and because that advantage played into anti-gangland sentiment that eventually, indirectly resulted in a RICO case against Al Capone (who was never connected, materially, to the murders), I wasted several hours of my youth waiting for Geraldo to open an empty vault. And then I learned just enough about chaos theory for it to make problems in my brain. Eleven or twelve years ago, I asked a very bearded and studious-looking professor, an author of historical narratives, about the problem. I figured he’d taught it in introductory courses, so I asked: How do history writers wrestle with knowing they’re streamlining a millisecond’s reaction to every variable that came before it? How do they omit and create seamless causality while trying to be true? I don’t remember the response. I remember the beard and the glare off the historian’s glasses, radiating silent but distinctly violent disdain. I walked away sure of only this: Historians possess the power to obliterate you completely. Omit you from having existed. I’d stick to fiction: the warm, pillowy comfort of plausible deniability. Then I wound up writing a book that needed a historical fiction disclaimer, and here I am. Writing as nonfictionally as I can make words. Before another sentence, understand that I am a simple yahoo—a fiction writer with no postsecondary education in history. My only provenance stems from obsessively researching genealogy. I’m sure the tendency came from growing up with eleven living, blood-related grandparents (parents of parents of parents of parents). One of them, a great-grandfather, fascinated me. They all did, but he was a bit fiery, a bit strange, and he had mesmerizing taste. Great-Grandpa bred horses before I was born and had a small den with loud but somehow matching red and green leather chairs and sofa, all embroidered with lassos or horse heads, all with wood arms shaped like wagon-wheels. Plastic horses—that were not toys—stood on the end tables beneath lamps whose shades were celluloid Western landscapes. Great-Grandpa listened to Hank Williams and Jim Reeves and Bob Wills. Not long before he died, when I was in high school, he said a coyote had been visiting each night, to eat junebugs under the lamppost between his and my grandparents’ houses. Grandma, his daughter I’d lived with next door, always said that whenever the old man finally died, he’d bolt up in the coffin and scream that she’d put him in the wrong shirt. In the end, he didn’t. But he was mercurial, in that particular way a person with many secrets can be mercurial. I know only one of those secrets, and I won’t spill it because Grandma taught me not to be a snitch. So, instead, I’ll tell an innocuous but illustrative anecdote: When my mother, pregnant with me, needed a job, Great-Grandpa apparently marched her into a regionally famous Omaha, Nebraska furniture store and demanded to speak with its regionally famous owner, a woman who was a lively character, one who exuded friendliness while commanding respect and instilling fear. She was not a person to whom one issued demands. And I suppose if what I’ve been told is correct, Great-Grandpa technically didn’t. He said a terse, “This is my granddaughter. She needs a job.” No “please,” no “thank you,” no “I would really appreciate it if.” That was it. And my mother had a job. Maybe a favor was owed. Maybe a sensitive matter was known. How the store owner and Great-Grandpa had developed that rapport, I don’t know. I can’t say much for certain because he did not leave much of a paper trail. If he did, I suppose Grandma would’ve burned it. She once warned me, “Unless it deals with money, never—ever—put it in writing.” (I’m aware of the irony, yes.) From what I have since gathered, this paper trail thing was a hard-learned family lesson. The voice of Great-Grandpa’s grandpa can be read in an old Supreme Court case (he was in a little trouble), and a couple of Great-Grandpa’s uncles were widely covered in local and regional newspapers. One was an ice man who was arrested at least four times I know about, twice for manslaughter. Neither was a disproven accusation. But he never spent more than a few nights in jail, and, somehow, the state historical society doesn’t have his booking photo. Neither does the society have a booking photo of his brother Jim, but that’s easily explained. Jim demanded its return during a court case completely unrelated to the booking photo. Like his father before him, Jim frequented court. When he wasn’t there to punch a judge or appear on larceny charges, he was a truant officer or cop. He worked at the courthouse in the first decade of the 1900s, too, until he may or may not have aided in the escape of four prisoners. He ran for low-level political offices, seemingly with the intention of splitting votes. Eventually, he operated his own private investigation agency. On the whole, the record suggests Jim had a vendetta against powerful people, which may or may not have been why he was committed to the State Hospital. (The Insanity Board was comprised of two political appointees and one doctor who seems to have been a real piece of work.) Jim died in the custody of the hospital roughly two years later. His brother the manslaughterer died about three years after that, all signs suggesting he was a manslaughter victim himself, but the coroner declined to pursue an inquest. Many people, for good reason, might avoid parading a particularly gnarled branch of family tree, but against sage advice, I decided to write a novel based on Great-Grandpa’s uncles—not about them—based on them. The end result was Little Underworld. I’d been researching for years already, but the book was a new excuse. At a point, I’d reread so many newspapers, my dreams were set in 1928. I needed to come up for air. I needed to see some shape that wasn’t laser-focused on the daily creep of time. I turned to what is probably the most influential book concerning the history of Omaha, Dr. Orville D. Menard’s River City Empire: Tom Dennison’s Omaha. Menard was widely loved as a great friend and mentor. I wish I’d had the chance to know him. I’d read his book once for fun, but as often happens with fun, I’d retained little I hadn’t heard or read elsewhere. River City Empire is a resource in books and newspapers, on the website of the state historical society, and, yes, throughout Wikipedia. I say the book concerns Omaha history because it’s not a history book. Menard says that in the preface: “A history of Omaha is not provided here, for such an endeavor is beyond the intent or purpose.” Instead, Menard was a political science professor. He transposed the theory of “political bossism” onto Omaha from the period of 1900-1933. The concept is what it sounds like—somebody (usually not an elected official) controls a city’s political power. Kansas City was known for Tom Pendergast; New York for Boss Tweed; Atlantic City for Nucky Johnson. River City Empire posits that Omaha had Tom Dennison. Now, Menard didn’t concoct this notion that Dennison ran Omaha. I could, with fair confidence, point to a few people who did concoct it, but I live in a place where descendants of powerful people are still around, and I’m the relative of a manslaughterer who was almost definitely manslaughtered. I don’t have much snitch-latitude. Dennison had long been cast as a political boss (when he wasn’t suing newspapers out of existence for libel). He was a thin, tall gambler who wore a bowler and a chunky diamond pin in his necktie—he looked the part. And he was involved in politics. That’s shady. Granted, nearly everyone involved in Omaha politics during (and before and after) Dennison’s alleged reign was shady, but there seems to be ample evidence he pulled some antics—maybe registered dead voters, probably registered voters whose addresses did not exist. Where things get tricky in Menard’s narrative—and much, much darker—is the possible degree of Dennison’s involvement in a mob’s racist, brutal murder of a man named Will Brown in September 1919. Will Brown was a black man accused of raping a white woman. While he was being held in the county courthouse, the mob set fire to the building. When Brown was turned over to them, they lynched, shot, burned, and dragged him through the streets. If you read about the murder, right here, you’ll find most writers note that a source said the accusation was untrue, that Brown was physically disabled. He was incapable of attacking anyone. That’s horrifying but also immaterial. Whether he did or didn’t commit a crime, a mob, comprised of thousands of people, burning a courthouse and demanding a man be turned over to them to be lynched, shot, burned, dragged, and photographed for posterity ranks as a fucking atrocity. Menard was (and was not) careful to avoid blaming Dennison directly for the murder. He writes, “There is no firm evidence the Dennison [political] machine actually instigated the particular events.” But, Menard does strongly suggest that Tom Dennison had such far-reaching control (and omniscience, it seems) that he’d actually thrown the preceding 1918 city election to his political opponents, thereby stoking what could, apparently, end only in the horrific nightmare of a person’s brutal murder. Menard quotes a nameless newspaper editor as recalling “a statement alleged to Dennison early in the campaign: ‘I think we better let the bastards have it their way for awhile [sic]; let’s lie low this next election—they’ll be glad to see us back.’” That reads like two things to me: a game of telephone and a trick of hindsight. But where I was ripped from the page so completely that I fact-checked Menard’s sources for months was when I came across a small, uncontroversial passage about Omaha Mayor James Dahlman. As the story goes, Mayor Dahlman was controlled by criminal mastermind Tom Dennison and was therefore elected continuously from 1900-1930 (aside from 1918-1920, when an unnamed newspaper editor suggested Dennison decided to teach the city a lesson). Menard writes this: “When the mayor needed transportation, he took a taxi or rode the streetcar. He neither owned an automobile nor accepted an official one (he said the city charter made no provision for it).” This is not true. And please know that, when I say something is true or not true, I say it as someone who knows narrative is a wobbly thing. We write symbols that carry meaning only because we agree on those meanings. We omit things we deem extraneous and create streamlined causality—“a temporary stay against confusion,” Robert Frost called it. Narratives are inherently imperfect constructions. But there is an actuality in the above statement. Specifically: A mayor had a car or didn’t. Dahlman did. Unless—I always go back to this—I am living inside the dream of a single cell of maybe an antelope or a cow. Or maybe the world has conspired to falsify hundreds of newspaper articles archived on the internet. Just for me. If neither of those is the case, I know that Mayor Dahlman drove a city-provided car, because Great-Grandpa’s uncle Jim, the PI, was hired to tail it in 1916. As a result, the mayor was enjoined from using it. Then, six more lawsuits were brought against Dahlman and five city commissioners, demanding their ouster and repayment of money used to maintain the vehicle from 1912 through 1917, an amount alleged to be $13,716.67. During that 1918 campaign, the one Dennison allegedly threw to his political opponents, “$13,716.67” featured prominently in political ads. When Dahlman gave stump speeches throughout the city, at least one newspaper noted that he didn’t address the subject. In other words, Mayor Dahlman’s use of a city car very likely factored into his failure to win reelection. The car wasn’t the sole reason (chaos theory). But I’m willing to bet that car was one of them. That seems to make a bit more sense than Dennison’s omniscience to me. Voters who lived hand-to-mouth, and most did, likely felt betrayed by an elected official out joyriding on their dime. Especially a guy was supposedly so beloved that a political science professor, born three years after that mayor’s death, dedicated nearly an entire chapter of a book to cleansing the mayor’s reputation. Right after associating him with an alleged criminal whose mastermind apparently far surpassed the level of Doyle’s Moriarty. If you’ve read this far, you’re surely saying, “So? An Omaha mayor had a car, and a poli-sci professor wrote a book. Why would that matter to anyone living in the here and now, especially outside of Omaha, Nebraska?” Because a theory, one of with a piece that is patently not true, is now referenced as fact. That is what narrative can do. Dr. Menard may have never intended his book to serve as a history, but it might as well be have carved into stone tablets. The big takeaway is that a very large chunk of an American city’s history, the one that’s taught in classrooms and cited by sources we should be able to trust, has been boiled down to this: A crime lord and puppeteer of local politics fixed elections and controlled the media. Through brainwashing and payoffs and cronyism, he engineered a mob to storm a courthouse and brutally murder a person. I wish it were true. I wish that was the only rational explanation behind Will Brown’s murder. I wish I could believe a single puppeteer was pulling the strings. I wish I could know that a collective of human beings, with consciousnesses, sensations, memories, even love for others in their lives—couldn’t do what they did. But I’m fairly sure they did. And I’m fairly sure if we keep saying they didn’t, not on their own, that is not great. If you’re curious about how the narrative ends—the Omaha one—justice saved the day. Not in the death of Will Brown—no one was ever convicted. But later, in 1932, Prosecutors claimed the city’s illegal liquor, prostitution, and gambling were controlled by a “syndicate,” a conspiratorial effort, headed by Tom Dennison. The lengthy trial effectively dismantled Dennison’s political machine. (Except no one was convicted in that trial, either. No proof.) Of course, one can’t let these things stop a good story. *** View the full article
  10. Here are some of the trickiest pitfalls to sidestep while crafting your novel. Remember, in each pitfall to be avoided is also an opportunity to be seized. Don’t set the stakes too low. Something vital has to be at risk. Anything from one person’s life to the survival of all humankind. Don’t wait. Hook your reader immediately. Maybe with a bang. My name was Salmon, like the fish; first name, Susie. I was fourteen when I was murdered on December 6, 1973. In newspaper photos of missing girls from the seventies, most looked like me: white girls with mousy brown hair. The beginning of The Lovely Bones by Alice Sebold draws you right in with a startling detail that throws you off balance. So does the iconic opening of 1984 by George Orwell: It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking thirteen. How can you start your thriller in a way? Don’t write one-dimensional protagonists. Jason Bourne doesn’t know where he is from nor how he became who he is. Lisbeth Salander of The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo is complex, enigmatic, with a troubled past. Ditto Camille Preaker in Gillian Flynn’s debut novel, Sharp Objects. And then there is Stephen King’s Carrie: humiliated, vengeful, powerful. And dozens more. Which leads to… Don’t forget to give your protagonist an “arc.” The most satisfying arc is one that brings out some positive aspect of the protagonist that he/she has suppressed. How do you do this? By making the protagonist confront obstacles and choices. Screenwriting guru Robert McKee, in his great book Story, puts it this way: “True character us revealed in the choices a human being makes under pressure—the greater the pressure, the deeper the revelation, the truer the choice to the character’s essential nature.” Don’t have mildly dangerous villains. Yes, whatever his or her flaws, the protagonist must be powerful enough to drive the story. But the villain must be—or at least seem to be—even more powerful. Hence Hannibal Lector. Hence Karla, the Soviet spymaster in many of John LeCarre’s novels. Hence Anton Chigurth, the hitman in Cormac McCarthy’s No Country for Old Men. (In the name Chigurth, I hear echoes of Cthulhu, the octopus-like monster created by H.P. Lovecraft.) Hence Michael Crichton’s velociraptors. They’re really powerful. Don’t forget: A human villain is still human. Hannibal Lector is intelligent and cultured, terrifying and captivating. He is a psychopathic serial killer and cannibal and he is a man who, as a boy, witnessed the murder of his sister. His evil actions come from this trauma. But remember; To understand all is not to forgive all. Hannibal Lector must pay for his crimes. Don’t be predictable. Upset expectations. William Goldman, novelist (The Princess Bride and Marathon Man) and Oscar-winning screenwriter (Butch Cassidy and the Sundance Kid and All the President’s Men) said, “Give the reader what they want, just not the way they expect it.” Don’t be pedestrian. Make your language pop. There is something to be said for deadpan prose, especially if your hero is a classic, hardnose stoic. But wherever possible, liven up your prose. In Farewell, My Lovely, Raymond Chandler writes, “It was a blonde. A blonde to make a bishop kick a hole in a stained glass window.” What a great mental picture: the window is colorful, the blonde is colorful. Write colorful. Don’t let your story drag or sag. Advice from Chandler: “When in doubt, have a man come through the door with a gun in his hand.” Keep things coming at your characters. And keep your story suspenseful, a page-turner, make the reader think “I gotta know what happens.” So how do you create suspense? In an op-ed in the New York Times on December 8, 2012, Lee Childs answers this question. I urge you to find and read the whole piece. Here is the crux of it: “How do you create suspense?” has the same interrogatory shape as “How do you bake a cake?” And we all know – in theory or practice – how to bake a cake. We need ingredients…and we are led to believe that the more thoroughly and conscientiously we combine them, the better the cake will taste…So writers are taught to focus on ingredients and their combinations…sympathetic characters… (plunged) into situations of continuing peril… But it’s really much simpler than that that. “How do you bake a cake?” has the wrong structure. It’s too indirect. The right structure and the right question is: How do you make your family hungry? And the answer is: You make them wait four hours for dinner. Don’t let the twist be obvious. But don’t let it come out of left field. The reader should say, “Wow! I didn’t see that coming!” And then, “But, yeah, now that it’s happened…of course, makes perfect sense.” Don’t reliably be reliable. Gillian Flynn’s Gone Girl alternates between Nick and Amy Dunne each telling the story—and each is an unreliable narrator. Paula Hawkins’ The Girl on the Train uses a first-person narrative from Rachel Watson (the chief protagonist), Anna Boyd/Watson and Megan Hipwell. All three are unreliable. In any thriller, the only person the reader should rely on is the author…rely on him or her to deliver a satisfying story. And remember, there is no such thing as a cookie-cutter unreliable narrator. Paula Hawkins says, “Amy Dunne is a psychopath, an incredibly controlling and manipulative, smart, cunning woman. (Rachel is) just a mess who can’t do anything right.” Consider creating your unreliable narrator(s). Don’t guess what you’re writing about. Know the place and its people. Elmore Leonard knew Detroit first-hand. But for his novels Pronto and Riding the Rap, set in Harlan County, Kentucky, he did a lot of research. How accurate is the F/X series Justified, based on those novels? The series creator gave his staff wrist bands bearing the initials WWED—meaning, “What Would Elmore Do?” Meaning, in times of doubt, trust the writer. Research and write so you earn the reader’s trust. Don’t settle for an overworked setting. Find a place that you can own. This is especially true if you’re writing a series. Tony Hillerman owns the Navaho lands. James Lee Burke owns the Texas-Louisiana Gulf Coast. George Crumley owns Montana. Elmore Leonard owns Detroit. Elmore Leonard also owns Miami…Carl Hiassen owns bizarre Florida…Tim Dorsey owns even more bizarre Florida. Robert Parker owns Boston…Dennis Lehane owns the rougher, blue-collar Boston. Ralph Dennis (admittedly less well known) owns Atlanta seen by an unlicensed PI and his hired muscle…Karin Slaughter owns Atlanta seen by an agent in the Georgia Bureau of Investigation. Martin Cruz Smith owns Moscow. Stieg Larsen owns Sweden. Jo Nesbo owns Norway. There are dozens more author-owned places but not every good place has been grabbed. For example, nobody yet really owns Las Vegas. Maybe you could try to? Or find a milieu that you can own. For example, within pre-World War II Europe, within the moral ambiguity of that time and place…In his Berlin Noir series, Philp Kerr owns Berlin. In his thrillers, Alan Furst owns all of pre-World War II Europe. Be ambitious. If you can’t find a place to own, create one. But base it on facts. In The Andromeda Strain, Michael Crichton created a secret underground laboratory to handle lethal microorganisms. He says, “A lot of Andromeda is…trying to create an imaginary world using recognizable techniques and real people.” In his Jurassic Park, Crichton created an environment based on what was known about dinosaurs a the time. In The Yiddish Policeman’s Union, Michael Chabon created an alternate history in which there is a thriving (and threatened) Jewish territory in Alaska. Like The Andromeda Stain and Jurassic Park, what makes this fiction believable is Chabon’s skillful use of facts. Don’t forget other possible milieus. I’ve seized on biotechnology. Studying biotechnology at Columbia, I was struck by the philosophical, moral and legal questions it raised, its potential to usher in new paradigms in our lives and in society, and the life-and-death stakes it could create for characters in a novel. My first thriller, Living Proof, was about the implications of the criminalization of embryonic stem cell research. Now, in Baby X, I look at the implications of a medical breakthrough called IVG—in vitro gametogenesis—in which any two people on Earth could make a baby. What if a world-famous singer has some of his DNA stolen? From just a trace of saliva, left on a mic he sang into, could come sperm or eggs… And definitely a thriller! *** View the full article
  11. At the turn of the twentieth century, American crime fiction was at a shallow ebb. Anna Katharine Green, who had achieved great success with The Leavenworth Case in 1887, continued to produce popular novels (and would do so until 1923), but the tastes of American readers of mystery fiction had turned to England. Certainly the popularity of the Sherlock Holmes stories had focused attention on British crime writing, but not until Mary Roberts Rinehart, whose first novel appeared in 1908, the popular The Circular Staircase, did American mystery writers again achieve success. It is not surprising, then, that Richard Harding Davis— the most popular American journalist of the day—set a work of crime fiction in London. In his novella, a visitor to London becomes lost in the fog at night and wanders into a house, where he finds two murder victims. Three different narrators tell of the adventure and the resulting investigation. Though one reviewer hailed it as a “decided innovation in ‘detective’ fiction,” that was hardly the case; in fact, its charm is in evoking many of the clichés and popular settings of crime writing. Ellery Queen, the great mystery author/editor, hailed the tale as the “curtain raiser” of the first golden age of detective short-storytelling, “a perfect blend of Anglo-American storytelling.” By the 1880s, fog had become a symbol of pervasive but hidden evil. Christine L. Croton, in London Fog: The Biography, observes: A metaphorical relationship between social conflict and fog became apparent—a fear that the most brutal members of the residuum could spread across London, moving from east to west, like the fog, to upset the social balance and wreak havoc and destruction. In the West End disturbances of 1886, indeed, this threat for a time became a reality, further stoking the fires of social tension and anxiety. The fogs of London had a special frisson for Victorian readers. Arthur Conan Doyle’s Holmes stories were indelibly set, with few exceptions, in fog- and smog-polluted London. Vincent Starrett, in his sonnet, “221B,” penned in 1942, characterized the setting of Doyle’s tales: A yellow fog swirls past the window-pane As night descends upon this fabled street A lonely hansom splashes through the rain, The ghostly gas lamps fail at twenty feet. Of course, Doyle was not the only writer to immerse his tales in fog. Charles Dickens’s Bleak House (1853) describes “fog everywhere. Fog up the river…fog down the river, where it rolls defiled among the tiers of shipping and the waterside pollutions of a great (and dirty) city.” Robert Louis Stevenson’s Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde (1886) has several scenes set in the fog, and the theme of pollution is central to the story: Jekyll’s downfall is brought about by “impurities” in the chemicals (as well as, of course, impurities in Jekyll himself). The London scenes of Bram Stoker’s Dracula (1897) are immersed in smoke, amid fears of the “unclean.” Indeed, even the fog itself could be a danger. In William Hay’s 1880 The Doom of the Great City, a black fog covers London for months, bringing death and destruction. Thus Davis’s evocation of a fog-shrouded city would have immediately set the stage for a tale of shocking crimes and characters who are not what they seem. In the Fog was Davis’s first attempt at long-form crime fiction. His previous writing had achieved solid success but included only a few criminous stories. For example, his collections Gallegher, and Other Stories (1891), Van Bibber and Others (1892), and The Exiles, and Other Stories (1894) dabbled in the occasional tale of robbers or grifts. Throughout his career, Davis drew on his stints as a war correspondent in the Second Boer War (in South Africa) and the Spanish-American War, both reporting on the action and fictionalizing his experiences. (Winston Churchill and Jack London were also well-known war correspondents of the era whose other writing was informed by the stories they lived and heard.) Davis’s first great success, the novella The Princess Aline (1895), is about the adventures of a young American artist who falls in love with a picture of a European princess and travels to Europe to find her. The book was the fifth bestselling book in America in its year of publication. Davis set out to make fun of the genre of crime fiction. The Englishman Sir Andrew, the lynchpin of In the Fog, is a devotee steeped in the mysteries of the French writer Émile Gaboriau and Arthur Conan Doyle (both specifically mentioned) as well as the countless other English and French crime writers of the day. The mystery reader was by nature an addict, Davis suggests, and certainly the bookstalls of fin-de-siècle London offered much to satisfy the addict’s cravings. The quantity of pre-twentieth-century crime fiction can only be estimated. Graham Greene and Dorothy Glover, for example, were assiduous collectors of those titles and in 1966 published a catalogue of their collection, consisting of 471 titles; however, Greene freely admitted that their collection was far from complete, and he hoped that in the ten years after publication, it would double in size. Davis’s Arabian Nights–like novella of three linked tales focuses on intrigues of great popularity. The “lost explorer” and “unknown” places of Africa were still very much in the minds of English-speaking readers, who hungrily followed the reports of the journalist Henry Morton Stanley on his search of Dr. David Livingstone in the 1870s and Stanley’s continued explorations of Africa through the 1890s. Other explorers, such as John Hanning Speke and Sir Richard Francis Burton, also piqued the interest of armchair travelers around the world, and fiction such as the African novels of H. Rider Haggard and Joseph Conrad was widely read. (Though controversial today, Haggard’s and Conrad’s depictions of Africa and African people were extremely popular with White English and American readers of the day.) At the same time, the activities of Russian spies and the glamor of Russia’s extensive nobility were equally appealing. M.P. Shiel’s Prince Zaleski, published in 1895, was a well-regarded series of mysterious, somewhat supernatural tales of an exiled Russian prince, and works like Leo Tolstoy’s War and Peace and Anna Karenina were reaching widespread English-speaking audiences (both first translated into English in 1886). Davis’s fiction often drew on his own life and experiences. For example, Davis admitted that The Princess Aline was drawn from his own infatuation with Princess Alix of Hesse-Darmstadt, who under the name Alexandra Feodorovna served as the Czarina of Russia.* “Gallegher” was at least partially autobiographical: in 1916, the editor of The Bookman stated as fact that there was a real office boy employed by the Philadelphia Press named Tommy Gallegher. Davis was assigned by the Press to cover a fight in a stable in a suburb of Philadelphia, and when the police raided, arresting everyone, Davis slipped his report of the fight to Gallegher, who was able to make his way back to the newspaper offices with the story in time for the morning edition. However, the crime in “Gallegher,” as in the case of In the Fog, is fictional. Davis himself had an adventure in the London fog in 1897, the same year in which he set this tale, and which was not unlike the events of the story. He had just finished Christmas dinner at the home of silent screen star Cecilia “Cissie” Loftus and her husband, Justin McCarthy, in the company of their mutual friend, the legendary actress Ethel Barrymore. Davis and Barrymore left the McCarthys’ around 11:00 p.m. Here is his own version: There was a light fog. I said that all sorts of things ought to happen in a fog but that no one ever did have adventures nowadays. At that we rode straight into a bank of fog that makes those on the fishing banks look like Spring sunshine. You could not see the houses, nor the street, nor the horse, not even his tail.…The cabman discovered the fact that he was lost and turned around in circles and the horse slipped on the asphalt which was thick with frost, and then we backed into lamp-posts and curbs until Ethel got so scared she bit her under lip until it bled. You could not tell whether you were going into a house or over a precipice or into a sea. The horse finally backed up a flight of steps, and rubbed the cabby against a front door, and jabbed the wheels into an area railing and fell down. That, I thought, was our cue to get out, so we slipped into a well of yellow mist and felt around for each other until a square block of light suddenly opened in mid air and four terrified women appeared in the doorway of the house through which the cabman was endeavoring to butt himself. They begged us to come in, and we did—Being Christmas and because the McCarthys always call me “King” I had put on all my decorations and the tin star and I also wore my beautiful fur coat…I took this off because the room was very hot, forgetting about the decorations and remarked in the same time to Ethel that it would be folly to try and get to Barkston Gardens, and that we must go back to the “Duchess’s” for the night. At this Ethel answered calmly, “yes, Duke,” and I became conscious of the fact that the eyes of the four women were riveted on my fur coat and decorations. At the word “Duke” delivered by a very pretty girl in an evening frock and with nothing on her hair the four women disappeared and brought back the children, the servants, and the men, who were so overcome with awe and excitement and Christmas cheer that they all but got down on their knees in a circle. So, we fled out into the night followed by minute directions as to where “Your Grace” and “Your Ladyship” should turn. For years, no doubt, on a Christmas Day the story will be told in that house, wherever it may be in the millions of other houses of London, how a beautiful Countess and a wicked Duke were pitched into their front door out of a hansom cab, and after having partaken of their Christmas supper, disappeared again into a sea of fog. Four years later, the imagination of Davis, still only thirty-seven, would spin a series of yarns that took shape from his own respite from the fog. Did Davis imagine himself as the dashing young American lieutenant? Was the Russian beauty another incarnation of his Princess Alix? These questions are intriguing but wholly irrelevant to enjoyment of this brisk tale. And so, into the fog… ______________________________ From Leslie Klinger’s introduction to IN THE FOG, by Richard Harding Davis. Copyright ©2024 by Leslie Klinger. Reprinted by permission of the publisher, British Library Crime Classics. All rights reserved. View the full article
  12. CrimeReads editors make their selections for the month’s best debut novels in crime, mystery, and thrillers. Andrew Boryga, Victim (Doubleday) In Boryga’s debut novel, Victim, a young hustler on the rise learns to manipulate the currency of identity as he bends the truth about his past and establishes himself in the world of New York media and letters. The satire in this novel comes in sharp and merciless, but the friendship at the story’s center steals the show, rounding out all the complexities and contradictions of two young men on different sides of the truth. Boryga is a keen observer of culture and a storyteller with style to spare. –DM Jennifer Croft, The Extinction of Irena Ray (Bloomsbury) Jennifer Croft is the renowned translator of Olga Tokarczuk and this debut takes full advantage of her background in the best way possible. In this complex and metaphysical mystery, eight translators arrive at a sprawling home in the Polish forest, only to find their author has gone missing. Where is Irena Ray? What secrets has she been keeping from her devoted fans? And what’s with all the slime mold? –MO Joel H. Morris, All Our Yesterdays (Putnam) In this rich historical reimagining of the lead-up to Macbeth, Morris asks, what if the Lady MacBeth had a son? And what if her new relationship with the thane MacBeth after the death of her brutal first husband was predicated on equality and respect, as opposed to the beaten-down womanhood of others in 11th century Scotland? Thoughtful, eerie, and full of medieval magic, Morris’ take on the much-maligned lady will perhaps have you rooting for her and her partner, or at least, feeling some sympathy for her quest of vengeance. –MO Sophie Wan, Women of Good Fortune (Gallery) This book is so damn delightful! In Women of Good Fortune, Lulu, Rina, and Jane have come up with the perfect heist to get out of the marriage trap and fulfill their dreams: they are going to steal the gift money from Lulu’s upcoming wedding to the scion of one of Shanghai’s wealthiest families. The heist requires an elaborate plan, and it’s no wonder that the novel got a shining endorsement from Grace D. Li, author of the last great heist story I enjoyed. I cannot wait for this to become a movie. Also I really appreciate that Sophie Wan’s bio includes her interest in “staying hydrated”—may we all learn from her example. *drinks water quickly* –MO Brendan Flaherty, The Dredge (Atlantic Monthly) Two brothers with a secret and a woman with a job to do (and traumas of her own to reckon with) converge at the site of a Connecticut pond scheduled to be dredged, in this powerful new novel. Flaherty deftly conjures up an atmosphere of dread and suspense, with all roads leading to the pond, and all concerns pointing toward what lies at its bottom. This is an assured, compulsively readable debut. –DM View the full article
  13. In a late episode of Better Call Saul, Saul Goodman beseeches his wife Kim Wexler, “What’s done can be undone.” Caught up in a web of lies and deaths, and questioning what she has become along the way, Kim has relinquished her law license, and Saul implores her to undo her decision in an act of desperation. He knows what she has worked to achieve; he knows the people she has helped. He knows that their partnership is on the line. His plea is also an interesting inversion of a line from Shakespeare’s historic play, Macbeth. Lady Macbeth, haunted by remorse to the point of bloody hallucinations, knows there is no going back from the murderous machinations she and her husband have set into motion, and laments, “What’s done cannot be undone.” At last, she acknowledges that her cruelty and her husband’s bloody deeds are about to catch up with them. Over four hundred years later, Saul says the line even as he knows it is untrue, even as he knows that his schemes—and Kim’s guilt—have brought their relationship to an end. Criminal couples have long inspired fascination in popular culture, in part thanks to our collective curiosity about their psychology. A single immoral mind we can make sense of. But an immoral romantic couple—Bonnie and Clyde, Aileen Wuornos and Tyria Moore, the “Lonely Hearts” murderers—unites two corrupt sensibilities working in tandem. Is it love that binds them, a connection bound between two disturbed people who have finally found their soul mates? Or is one, dominant and sociopathic, manipulating the other, who is weaker and likely to follow? This was the speculation about the crime of the (early 20th) century—the 1924 Leopold and Loeb trial—in which two young men were convicted of kidnapping and killing a 14-year-old boy, Bobby Franks. Leopold and Loeb’s relationship was itself an object of psychological speculation: the two spent seven months planning to commit the “perfect” crime. It was also the inspiration for Alfred Hitchcock’s parlor thriller, Rope. Based on the 1929 play by Patrick Hamilton (perhaps more well-known for Gas Light, from which the word “gaslighting” is derived), it stars Jimmy Stewart stars as a former teacher, whose jovial Nietzschean/Dostoyevskian thought experiments about the “exceptional man” (the Übermensch who operates beyond common moral laws) have influenced a pair of his former students. Released in 1948, just after the conclusion of the Nuremberg Trials, Rope was a poignant reflection on the horrors to which such a philosophy leads. But the film’s main focus is a couple: the two young men, Brandon and Phillip, who strangle a classmate and place him in a wooden chest that will ultimately serve as both a temporary coffin and a table from which they will serve their invited guests—including the victim’s father—dinner. In fiction, the couple succeeds for a time. They are the epitome of partnership: two minds operating as one. The recent streaming series, Mr. and Mrs. Smith, highlights the development of this unified thinking. It follows two single characters—played by Maya Erskine and Donald Glover—who each apply for a job as covert agents that requires them hide in plain sight under the disguise of a marriage. Having signed up for the money, they each wonder what it would be like if their partnership were not merely a cover. Initially, the excitement of the job is not as enticing as the potential relationship. As that relationship develops, then becomes threatened, the primary tension arises not in their being caught, but in preserving the partnership. They have to be aligned, mentally as well as emotionally, and it is this facet that is tested. Killer couples are unified in their ambition, and they seldom have kids, at least in fiction. A child for the criminal couple sets a higher moral task. They can no longer (should no longer) be solely devoted to the partner and their joint ambitions. This tension is the premise of my own novel, All Our Yesterdays, which weaves The Tragedy of Macbeth together with some of the historical elements about the real couple that the Bard ignores: mainly, that they had a child. Shakespeare’s play, in emphasizing this noble couple’s ambition to become king and queen of Scotland, removes the historical fact that Lady Macbeth had a son from a previous marriage. What’s more, the actual Macbeth adopted his wife’s son as his own and later made him his heir. Shakespeare’s omission of a child living in the Macbeths’ castle plays an important thematic role in the play: it eliminates the stakes raised by heredity. The son, who features in my reimagined prelude, becomes a binding force for the couple’s humanity and the potential for their ruin. Sigmund Freud, citing his contemporary, the Austrian physician Ludwig Jekels, suggests that Shakespeare potentially saw the Macbeths as a single character, broken into two personages. They split the mental and moral ramifications of the crime: for example, Macbeth hallucinates a dagger, but that moment of madness actually transfers fully to Lady Macbeth, who suffers a complete mental breakdown along with her own hallucinations. “Together,” Freud writes, “they [Macbeth and Lady Macbeth] exhaust the possibilities of reaction to the crime, like two disunited parts of a single psychical individuality, and it may be that they are both copied from the same prototype.” Which brings us to the inevitable: the killer couple’s relationship will fail. Justice will find them—or death. At some point their love will no longer be enough to bind them. It’s as though this intense unity—the twin minds, the divided individual—cannot possibly hold. One of them has to relent, feel the remorse they have been denying themselves, see the lack of remorse in their partner, which now makes them unideal. One goes too far; the other has to break free. We can imagine what this means for Brandon and Phillip, the two young artful murderers in Hitchcock’s Rope. I won’t spoil Better Call Saul or Mr. and Mrs. Smith except to say that, as outside observers, we are more upset by the threat to the relationship than to their lawful comeuppance. By and large, whether it is Macbeth and Lady Macbeth, or Saul and Kim, we know the criminal couple cannot get away with it—at least not both of them. It’s unnatural, that level of intimacy. To be completely united in love is romantic, but to be completely united in the mind is psychopathic. *** View the full article
  14. Sometimes novels inadvertently reflect some aspect of the current zeitgeist, and Irish writer Claire Coughlan’s first one is this kind of story. Set in 1968 during the Christmas season, Where They Lie is a complex tale with a large cast—both living and dead—about the mysterious disappearance in 1943 of a theatre actress, Julia Bridges, and a former mid-wife, Gloria Fitzpatrick, who may or may not have played a role in that disappearance. Gloria was also a patron of the theatre where Julia performed. While never charged with a crime related to Julia’s disappearance, in 1956 Gloria was sentenced to hang for performing a backstreet abortion. Fast forward to the night before Christmas Eve 1968, and young, competitive, aspiring journalist Nicoletta Sarto is listening to the few staffers in the newsroom at the Irish Sentinel talk about the biggest Christmas Eve story in the paper’s history: “Gloria Fitzpatrick, the very last woman in the history of the state to get the death penalty, though of course it was later commuted to life imprisonment on the grounds of insanity,” according to Duffy, the editor of the Sentinel. Duffy then points out that Gloria was also suspected of being involved in Julia’s disappearance. As a junior reporter, it’s Nicoletta’s job to make calls to the local Garda stations around Dublin, to ask if any newsworthy events have occurred. It’s a quiet time, but a local Inspector, David Morris, phones back the newspaper with some startling news: A body has been dug up in the yard of a prominent family and there is a wedding ring among the remains. It’s identified as belonging to Julia Bridges. “When Inspector Morris rings off, Nicoletta can feel her world flip on its axis. A flicker of static snakes up from the pit of her stomach to sit tight at the crown of her skull. This story is hers for the telling.” In an email interview, Coughlan mused about the evolution of her story, and how the writing process can take an author to unexpected places. “My story had many inspirations so it’s difficult to pinpoint one and say it’s based on a real-life occurrence. I did a lot of research around the subject of backstreet abortion in mid-century Ireland – reading contemporaneous newspaper archives, academic papers, court reports. “The character of Gloria Fitzpatrick, the abortionist in my novel, came to me first. I wanted to find out what made her tick, and I wrote lots of fragmentary pieces around the interiority of her life. I thought I was writing literary fiction. Then I revisited the character of a journalist from something I’d written for work submitted during my MA and MFA courses at UCD (University College Dublin), and I combined them, realizing that Nicoletta was my protagonist, who would follow the thread of the story, whereas Gloria worked better as the antagonist.” The journalist as detective is a popular crime fiction subgenre. I asked Coughlan if she made that choice based on her own past work as a journalist. “I felt I knew that world. Though because I’ve made my journalist-as-detective a 1960s sleuth, there was a remove from my own experience in the 2000s-2010s, and I hoped the character of Nicoletta wouldn’t be read as autobiographical.” And why crime fiction? “I had a story I wanted to tell, and crime fiction seemed to be the best vehicle for it, quite apart from being a big reader in the genre. I love the structure of crime novels; there’s freedom in being able to play with that. Anyway, I think at heart all novels are mysteries; crime fiction just goes bigger and better with the stakes.” Where They Lie, as with so many Dublin-set novels, revels in the history, speech and milieu of the city. Although Coughlan was not around during the era the story unfolds in, she didn’t see that as a problem. “I’m very familiar with Dublin as I lived in Dublin city centre for 10 years and walked everywhere – it’s a city that’s easily traversable on foot. Many of the buildings haven’t changed that much; it’s a blend of old and new, the grimy and glittering. I don’t think Ireland of the 1960s had changed that much from the 1980s I remember when I was a child, so I didn’t have to do that much research when it came to things like vernacular and food, for example.” Where They Lie is brimming with memorable characters and a labyrinthine structure. It’s as though Nicoletta is on a journey she isn’t cognizant of until very late in the story. It’s also a plot that’s impossible to summarize without revealing the life-changing stepping stones Nicoletta must navigate as she encounters one startling, revelatory twist after another. About that expansive sea of humanity populating the story…why so many? Coughlan laughs, “I agree there’s a large cast of characters in Where They Lie! To be honest, I didn’t intend to have so many, but Nicoletta speaks to so many people in the course of her investigation [of Julia’s demise] that it grew and grew. Creating characters is something I really enjoy doing, along with plotting, and once I had the main character relationships figured out, everyone else followed. I started with a deep dive into who the main characters were and the rest came in increments. “New characters would appear on the pages in the course of drafting, and then I’d have to figure out what to do with them. Usually, I’d make copious notes both on my laptop and the Notes app on my phone ‘telling’ myself the story, so I’d have some idea of the direction they were going to take.” Coughlan conveys an evocative sense of place, and offers the reader lovely, sometimes melancholy, descriptions of Dublin. After an emotional encounter with a peripheral character, she trudges home in waning light: “The sky is dark and leaden as Nicoletta wanders listlessly back in the direction of town. The windows of the grand Victorian squares and neat Edwardian terraces of Rathmines and Ranelagh are swaddled at this hour, though it’s only midafternoon. A premature dusk has already descended, hanging limply over the rust-colored brick chimneys like residual smoke after a conjurer’s final act.” In another scene, she goes to the home of a man named Gerard, who is the brother of Gloria Fitzpatrick. The power is off, and Gerard says it’s because of a storm. He’s hitting the sauce, and “…grunts and shuffles back over to his position against the wall, looking out on the brambles in the back garden, which are cast in a hallucinogenic glow. Nicoletta marvels at their sheer scale. The spikes twist and turn inward, forming a series of cavernous tombs.” When she asks Gerard a key question in her quest for truth, just before he replies, the power returns and “the room is flooded with light, bringing each shabby corner into chaotic relief.” It’s a nice touch. Is she working on the next book? “Yes! It’s a two-book deal with Simon & Schuster UK and Harper in the US, so I’ve re-immersed myself in Nicoletta’s world to meet the looming deadline for book number two, which is a sequel, set a year and a half later in the summer of 1970.” Where They Lie is a striking debut – perhaps a bit overstuffed with twists and that large cast, but in the end, Coughlan cunningly handles it all with a confident aplomb. *** View the full article
  15. I joined my first cult when I was…just kidding. Mostly. When I was born in the early 80s, my parents were part of a church in Virginia Beach, an area influenced by the likes of Pat Robertson and his Christian Broadcasting Network as well as Jim and Tammy Faye Bakker. These are the kinds of organizations that helped fuel the Satanic Panic, decrying games like Dungeons & Dragons and any Halloween celebration that wasn’t spent as a simple “Harvest Festival” in a church gym. My family’s Southern Baptist Church was no exception, inviting my parents to break their classic rock records in order to avoid “backmasking,” the supposed subliminal evil messages encoded in rock songs and only discernible when played backwards. Some might view what my parents were experiencing in the early 80s as a religious moment; others, as a cultish craze. My family’s church provided community, comfort, and belonging, but it also, by default, often dictated how members voted, which media they consumed, and their circle of friends. It’s all about perspective, but a decade and a half later, my parents very much regretted the fact that they’d broken some of their favorite records at the church’s behest. When I began developing the idea for my third novel, Watch It Burn, I knew that I wanted to investigate an organization declaring itself #notacult while also subtly infiltrating an entire community. I soon found that the hardest part of writing a book with a cult at the center is figuring out the appeal for potential members. How does one person or one couple or one small group of leaders assert themselves as ‘the supreme authority’ while also remaining charismatic enough to draw followers in? This question—the how and the why of cults—is one I explored as I dove into the story at the heart of Watch It Burn. The mystery seems simple at first: a sixty-five year old woman drowned in only two inches of the Guadalupe River. But as three women in the town—a journalist, a teacher, and the dead woman’s daughter-in-law—grow suspicious and begin digging deeper into the family and the self-help organization they own, the women find concerning ideology and a slow-burn takeover of their tiny Texas town. Infiltrating and exposing the cult becomes their ultimate goal. I knew I needed inspiration as I wrote Watch It Burn, so I sought out other works that could serve as mentor texts for me to study and also provide a bit of entertainment as I developed my own creepy cult. Here’s what I found and the six books I’d recommend to anyone looking for a creepy cultish read. According to Amanda Montell’s nonfiction Cultish, many of us are part of organizations that have cultish elements, some beneficial (like extending opportunities) of belonging, and some, well, less so. Montell tackles traditional cults like Jonestown and Scientology as well as groups that use common language that invite others to join. In Montell’s appraisal, MLMs, SoulCycle, marketing companies, and religious communities make the cut for cultish status. Reviews online sometimes berate her for going this far, but I thought that her reasoning was part of the appeal of the book that is aptly named for not exactly being a cult. Inspired in part by the Sarah Lawrence Sex-Cult, Ashley Winstead’s The Last Housewife explores the long-lasting effects of trauma in early adulthood just as a young woman is coming of age. The novel opens with Shay Evans, all grown up and living a quiet and privileged life in a wealthy Texas suburb when her past comes calling. Her friend Laurel, who was involved in the cult that Shay has pushed far into her past, has been found dead. With the help of a podcast creator and old friend, Shay embarks on a quest to find out what really happened to Laurel and how she can bring justice—and perhaps, revenge—to the man who has caused so much harm. When Delilah Walker returns home for the funeral of her teenage sweetheart, she suspects that there’s more to his death. The church at the heart of the rural community has grown into a mega-church, and the pastor, who espouses misogynistic teachings and ultra-conservative ideology, seems, in Del’s mind, to be the primary suspect. In Amy Suiter Clark’s Lay Your Body Down, Del sticks around to explore what’s really been going on in the cultish church that has overtaken her hometown, and more importantly, to find out what actually happened to the love of her life. The Family Upstairs is my favorite Lisa Jewell book, which is saying a lot since I’m an adoring fan. Libby Jones is aching to find out the identity of her birth parents, but when she discovers the truth on her twenty-fifth birthday, she may regret ever having wanted to know. Libby learns that she was one of the lone survivors, a baby found in a crib, in a tiny cult taking up residence in an abandoned London manor twenty-five years earlier. Now, Libby knows the truth and has inherited the manor where three adults, all dressed in black, were found dead decades ago. From the very first page of Alison Wisdom’s The Burning Season we meet charismatic Papa Jake and his ‘miracles,’ and we’re transported to a tiny Texas enclave where no one is allowed to call 911 as long as only one house at a time burns to the ground. Rosemary, in an effort to save her struggling marriage moves to the town of Dawson and joins its church, but even after trying to fit in, she is aimless in this conservative community. After meeting a new mother in need of a friend, she finally feels as if she’s found a purpose, but the fires are spreading, turning everything around her to ash and ember. In The Body Next Door by Maia Chance, Hannah is eager to keep up the façade of a happy, rich young wife and mother, but when a construction crew unearths bones next door to her family’s second home on Orcas Island, she must face the past she’s tried to bury. As a child, she was connected to a cult on the island, and she knows more than she’s saying about those troubling years and the pile of bones next door, but will she be brave enough to face her past and to confront her own secrets—and those nearest to her—in an effort to protect her and her children’s future? A speculative element at the heart of this cultish story makes this a true page turner. Chance’s novel launches this summer, so PreOrder today. *** View the full article
  16. I don’t think of myself as a reader or writer of crime novels, and yet (knocking on my own skull to see if anyone’s inside) almost all of my novels do have a crime—or a strange disappearance or a person concealing their identity or a similar mystery. My latest novel, Discipline, involves three stolen paintings, a no-doubt-about-it-crime story, inspired (in part) by reading about a man fleeing from police who, perhaps to conceal evidence, burned two of a famous painter’s canvases by the side of the road. I realize (more knocking on my own head) that I loved Donna Tartt’s A Secret History and am a fan of Kate Atkinson’s fantastic Detective Brody series, so I am as deluded about my reading as my writing. That said, here is a list of crime books that don’t exactly read like crime books, because they take on a lot more (emotionally, culturally, historically) than the apparent crime that is (very much) at the heart of the novel. Anne Berest, The Postcard One day a mysterious postcard arrives in Anne Berest’s mother’s mailbox. On it, and in an unfamiliar hand, are the names of three of her relatives who died in the Holocaust. No signature. Who sent this and why? Though she is Jewish, Berest has not really been exposed to the faith or culture. She only investigates who sent the postcard and why years later, after an anti-Semitic incident at her daughter’s school. The result is a long book that is a quick read, ranging between past and present, as Berest describes her remarkable family’s history, up to and during the war, when some perished and others worked for the Resistance. The story is also about its own telling, so we watch Berest as she tracks down clues, interviews strangers, and finally solves the mystery of the postcard and what it means, for her at least, to be a Jew. Lan Samantha Chang, The Family Chao In The Family Chao, Lan Samantha Chang kills off the patriarch of a Midwestern Chinese-American family, and, in good detective-fiction style, there are plenty of suspects, given how unlikeable the man was. Fate is a suspect, too, as the death might have been an accident. The story reads less like a whodunit than a Russian novel, because it is one in disguise, a loose retelling of Dostoevsky’s The Brothers Karamazov. The action starts after the adult Chao children return home for Christmas, just after their mother decides to leave her husband for an extended stay in a Buddhist temple. The drama focuses on family angers and hurts, as well as a community of Chinese-Americans whose lives revolve around the family restaurant that is the father’s dynasty, legacy, and weapon. Jane Pek, The Verifiers Jane Pek examines generational differences in Chinese-American families, even as she places her protagonist Claudia Lin at the Verifiers, a secretive firm for daters who wonder if their online matches are honest about their identities. When one client disappears, Lin (who adores mystery novels) decides to investigate, helping herself (without permission) to her agency’s files and tracking software. How do we understand intimacy and trust in contemporary relationships? Though Claudia’s a whiz with computers, she’s someone whose life raises this question more than answers, given she steers away from romantic attachments. The novel pokes gentle fun at the detective novel genre and Chinese stereotypes, while ringing an alarm bell about the dangers of dating (and existing) in the digital age. Margot Livesey, The Boy in the Field Three siblings, walking home from their school in a small town outside Oxford, England find a dead boy in a field. Who is he? What happened to him? The novel answers this mystery eventually but the real mystery is with the three siblings. How will they incorporate this terrible find? One sibling tries to figure out what happened, another finds herself interested in her own blossoming sexuality (even, because she assumes the boy was killed by a man, as she considers the potential darkness of any male partner), and a third (who is adopted) is prompted by the drama to search for his birth mother. The crime is solved, but the real mystery is with the evolving relationships in, and outside, the family. Constance Debré, Love Me Tender The criminal in this memoir-novel is the narrator accused (unjustly) of pedophilia by her ex, now that they are in a difficult custody battle over their son. The marital break-up had been amicable until the author decides to explore her sexuality and recast herself more broadly, quitting her job as a lawyer, downsizing her material life, while she upsizes her sexual life with women. Debré’s book is not for everyone and her rejection of the status quo seems at times the admirable, free experiment she claims it is and at times like an extended pat on her own quite muscular back, since with daily swims she strips her body, as well as her life, to the bone. Even so, the drama of her case and desire to recreate herself intrigues, as does her swift, tight writing, and the moments when her emotional life and philosophical beliefs seem at odds. Susan Perabo, The Fall of Lisa Bellow This novel tells the story of two middle-school girls forced to the floor during a robbery, one of whom is subsequently abducted. Though the novel explores the possibilities of what might have happened to the kidnapped girl, the focus in on those left behind—specifically the girl who isn’t taken and her family. How does the girl handle her survivor’s guilt, especially given she never much liked Lisa Bellow, the “popular girl” in her grade? How does her mother handle her relief and concern for her daughter? And what about her brother who has his own crisis to weather, after a traumatic baseball injury? Despite its dark subject, this book, which is so astute about parents and teens, pushes toward healing by letting the characters reckon with the imagined truth and the actual truth in a genuinely complex way. Colson Whitehead, The Nickel Boys The crime of murder as experienced by the near victims is the subject of this horrifying, infuriating yet compelling tale of young Black men at a juvenile reform school in 1960s Florida. The Pulitzer-Prize winning novel is based on a real place and will make you enraged, astound you with human evil, and impress you with how victims endure psychological and physical pain. It will also amaze you with the formal trick, late in the novel, that recasts the historical nightmare to underline the long reach of such tragedies. *** View the full article
  17. “They had gold and my baby was sick.” —Mahin Qadiri About ninety-five miles northwest of the Iranian capital Tehran is the city of Qazvin. Located on the foothills of the Alborz Mountains, it has a population of more than four hundred thousand people. It’s a place rich in cultural and historical significance. It’s also a place where people are turning up dead. A man is murdered in 2006. Between February and May 2009, five women are murdered. The method used in the killings is similar, as is the method by which the bodies are disposed of. Each of the victims has been strangled and, apart from the first victim, all of them are women. Specifically, older women. Is there a serial killer on the loose in Qazvin? *** Iran isn’t the first place you think of when it comes to serial killers. Yet in the twenty-first century alone, there have been several. In the early 2000s, Saeed Hanaei (the “Spider Killer”) targeted female sex workers in Mashhad, claiming he was cleansing the city of “moral corruption”; his known victim tally was sixteen. Mohammed Bijeh (the “Tehran Desert Vampire”) was convicted of raping and murdering at least sixteen young boys, ages eight to fifteen, in 2004, and at least two adults, with some accounts listing the victim count in excess of forty. Farid Baghlani (the “Cyclist Killer”), a self-proclaimed woman hater, killed at least fifteen women and girls and one boy between 2004 and 2008 in Abadan and Khorramshahr. Omid Barak (the “Highway Killer”), targeted women who “cheated,” murdering at least ten women between 2006 and 2008 in the Karaj area. As one might expect, all these serial killers were men. Catching a Serial Killer When the body of an older male is found beneath a bridge in Qazvin, there’s nothing to indicate it’s the work of a serial killer. After all, the murder could have been committed for any number of reasons, perhaps a dispute of some kind or illegal dealings that turned violent, maybe even something to do with drugs. Despite the best efforts of police to find the culprit, the case goes cold. Nearly three years pass before another body turns up, and then another. The randomness of the murders and their frequency raise alarm bells, especially since there’s nothing to suggest that these might be “crimes of passion.” Suddenly residents of the city find themselves on edge as they wonder who among them might be next. A pattern is emerging. Discounting the earlier murder of the man, the victims are women who range in age from their mid-fifties to early seventies—and they’ve all been strangled, many with their own headscarves, and their jewelry forcibly removed from their bodies. They also appear to have been drugged. These are women who were going about their normal daily business, never to be seen alive again. Are these specifically targeted killings? The fact that the victims are older women does seem to indicate that the killer is seeking a “type.” Perhaps the theft of the jewelry is a bonus rather than a motivating factor. Police are now faced with the very real possibility that they have a serial killer in their midst. Prosecutor Mohammad Bagher Olfat assigns a team to the case. Special investigators are also brought in from Tehran. It’s becoming clear from both the evidence they have and the eyewitnesses they’ve interviewed that the victims either knew or trusted their killer. But what happened to the gold jewelry that was removed from the bodies? To sell that much gold, a purchasing invoice would be required. Police get to work, tracking the stolen gold in the markets as well as checking footage from CCTV cameras. Thanks to several eyewitness accounts, as well as a footprint found on the headscarf belonging to one of the victims, investigators are now certain that the killer drives an older-model, light-colored Renault car. And the killer is female. As is the case in crimes such as these, people begin to crawl out of the woodwork, all claiming to have important information that will help solve the crimes. Qazvin police receive several tips a day from supposed eyewitnesses, including melodramatic accounts from “victims” who say that they too, were taken by the killer, but had fought back, narrowly escaping death. Having no choice but to follow every lead, police investigate these claims, only to find that they’re bogus. Unfortunately, it’s not uncommon for people to invent stories or provide false evidence to police. It’s often done to gain attention or sympathy, or to frame someone, or even to avoid being suspected of a crime themselves. Not only does this hinder the investigation process, it can lead to wrongful accusations and convictions. It can even lead to a prison sentence for the storyteller. Valuable police time is wasted—time that could have been spent trying to solve a crime instead of chasing down fake leads. But finally, a credible eyewitness does come forth, and she has a harrowing tale to tell. A woman in her sixties tells investigators that on April 2, 2009, she escaped from the killer during a visit to the city’s Chahar Anbiya Shrine. A young woman approached her while she was praying and asked if she could join her in prayer. Noticing the woman’s jewelry, the younger draws her into a conversation about which is superior—yellow or white gold. Later, as they’re leaving, the older woman is offered a lift home. She gets into her new friend’s Renault, which is parked nearby on the street. She doesn’t become suspicious until she’s offered a box of juice to drink, which she repeatedly refuses. The driver becomes more and more insistent that she drink it, ignoring her passenger’s repeated pleas to stop and let her out. It’s only when the woman starts banging on the car window that the driver finally stops the car. The eyewitness works with police to create an E-fit rendering of the Renault driver. CCTV cameras are installed at the shrine, since investigators believe the perpetrator might try again. When the police captain stops by to check that the cameras are working properly, his car, which he parked nearby, gets ticketed. Suddenly this opens up a whole new line of inquiry. What if the killer’s car was ticketed for parking in the same area? Police reach out to traffic enforcement to see if any Renault cars received a fine on the day in question. They find one. The parking ticket was issued on the same day their eyewitness had accepted a ride home from a young woman driving a Renault. Coincidentally, the driver of the Renault was questioned about a previous murder—that of a man whose body was found beneath a bridge, though nothing came of it. In a further coincidence, a woman found strangled to death in her home was a relative of the Renault driver, and she was questioned in that case as well, as were other family members and friends of the victim. But again, nothing came of it. When the woman who managed to escape is shown a photograph of the Renault driver, she confirms that it’s the same individual she met at Chahar Anbiya Shrine—the young woman who gave her a ride. Finally, police have their killer. Armed police officers, accompanied by female guards, descend on the home of Mahin Qadiri in the Minoodar district of the city. She is arrested, along with her husband. Now that they have her in custody, investigators find themselves grappling with several questions: Is their suspect responsible for all the murders? Are there other murders they haven’t yet discovered or traced to her? Did she act alone? At first, Mahin denies everything and refuses to speak for forty-eight hours. Plenty of evidence is put in front of her—evidence that’s difficult to explain away. The yellow powder found in her home is the same anesthetic substance that was used on the victims. One of her shoes matches the footprint found on the headscarf of a victim. Invoices for the sale of gold have been found in her home. An object belonging to one of the victims has been found in her home. Newspaper clippings related to the crimes have been found in her home. And adhesive tape matching the tape used on one of the victims has been found in her car. There’s also the matter of blood evidence, which is even harder to explain away, though Mahin still gives it her best shot. A forensic examination with a special laser light has uncovered traces of blood on the Renault’s car seat—blood that someone attempted to wash away. Although Mahin acknowledges that it’s blood, she claims that it came from meat she purchased from the butcher. However, the tests indicate that it’s human blood, not animal. Mahin starts confessing, eventually admitting to five of the murders, though she stops short of admitting to all six. Despite the pile of evidence against her, she denies responsibility for the murder of her relative, her aunt-in-law, who was murdered in her own home. Investigators are certain she did it, but surmise that her denial could be due to concerns over who in the family will look after her two children, one of whom is disabled with cerebral palsy. The victim is the sister of Mahin’s mother-in-law, and her mother-in-law is the only person who made any attempt to help Mahin with her difficulties; therefore, her reluctance to admit guilt for this particular murder is understandable. However, once assurance is obtained that her two daughters will be cared for by her mother-in-law, Mahin confesses to this murder as well. Because authorities question whether it’s possible for Mahin to have committed all the murders on her own, they suspect she has a partner in crime, her husband being the most likely. They also wonder if a criminal band could be behind the killings and the theft of gold jewelry. Despite Mahin’s insistence that she worked alone, they don’t believe her. They’ve never come across a murder case like this, with a woman as sole perpetrator. Choosing the victims, doing the killing, getting rid of the evidence—could she have done all this by herself? Investigators decide to do reconstructions of the crime scenes with Mahin to confirm her story—from where she picked up her victims to where she took them and what she did to them. The details add up. Mahin Qadiri is their serial killer. ___________________________________ An excerpt from Women Who Murder: An International Collection of Deadly True Crime Tales. By Mitzi Szereto. Copyright 2024. Published by Mango. Reprinted with permission. All rights resesrved. View the full article
  18. Anyone who knows me, or has read my second book, or has stood too close to me at a bookstore knows I despise the concept of genre. I despise the tweed coat that genre wears when it decides what is literary and what is not. I despise the lab coat genre wears when it separates hard sci-fi from soft sci-fi. I despise genre’s internalized misogyny as it reliably separates anything feminine into whatever category is least likely to garner acclaim. There is one thing, though, that I find genre invaluable for: communicating a contract with the reader. Imagine a line with “Safety” at one end and “Threat” at the other. Genre determines where on this line your reader can expect to be left. Are you working in Happily Ever After romance? Then you are located closer to the “Safety” side of things. You’ve made certain promises to the reader that, no matter how perilous the waters, you will get them back to port. Psychological horror? Oh, you have promised misery. The reader is consensually entering into an antagonistic relationship with you and expects that to be honored with suffering. Of course, very few works exist only at the furthest points on this scale – there is usually some care in terror, and some peril in love – but generally if you’ve promised psychological horror and the reader never feels disquieted, you’ve not fulfilled your contract. The same is true if you’ve promised love, and instead made the reader feel disquieted the whole time. This understanding is why I write every single story as a murder mystery author, even though I do not strictly write murder mysteries. The murder mystery author’s contract is neither kind nor cruel, but a kind of trickster middle. The murder mystery author gets to behave like an older sibling who is as bullying as they are loving: I will trick you, there will be death, but there will also be resolution. It is the antagonism of the horror writer, but in the form of a game. And, most importantly, it is a game the reader can win. There are still standards for murder mysteries. Make the game impossible to figure out and the reader will feel spurned by an unearned ending. Make the game too easy, and risk getting the dreaded “I figured that out in the first chapter” from the obnoxiously annoying know-it-all former prodigy whose name rhymes with Papaya Yonson. But at its bones, murder mysteries operate with the mechanics of storytelling laid bare. The best pieces of writing advice I’ve ever received could be summed up as “Write like it’s a murder mystery even when it’s not”; “Your main character should know at least one thing you withhold from your audience, so their life feels believable rich” – the best part of a murder mystery is when a character’s secrets come out, as do the reasons to trust or distrust them. “B Plots should feel like side quests, not derailments, so the reader doesn’t feel you’ve wasted their time” – good mystery authors have to balance red herrings, so they feel like contributions to the story rather than unfair, unnecessary excess. And, of course, perhaps the best writing advice I’ve ever gotten: “The perfect endings are equal parts surprising and inevitable.” You can easily succeed at the former (“It was all a dream!” or “Surprise! Turns out the narrator was a cat all along!”). But that doesn’t make for a satisfying ending. Likewise, you can succeed at making things feel inevitable simply by being a boring and predictable writer. But to do both and get that “Wait but… oh, of course” reaction is always the goal. Even if we’re striving for this reaction through plot and character arcs generally, this is the standard in murder mysteries for revealing the culprit. As a speculative fiction or science fiction or science fantasy author, (you’ll recall my position on genres), I am able to pull the rug out from readers even more thoroughly, as my readers do not know they are reading a mystery. They don’t initially know to be suspicious of me, or to look for clues, because they think they are reading a science fiction novel. Just like you thought you were reading a craft essay. But I told you: always keep one thing from your reader, always tell a little lie. So now the truth, or a new version of it: The reason I write in the murder mystery format has nothing to do with craft. I am drawn toward murder mystery as my north star because I learned long ago that we all want to feel safe, but for some of us an imperfect safety is the only kind we can trust. I am up to my absolute eyebrows in creative writing education, but I did not learn to identify with murder mysteries in a craft course or workshop. I learned to love murder mysteries listening to audiobooks in the car with my grandmother, riding shotgun if I was lucky, riding less-than-legally in the storage compartment in the back of the van if I was not (the burden and joy of being the youngest of my sisters and cousins). Long before the era of Libby, Audible, or Spotify’s new nefarious audiobook option, (Marry, Fuck, Kill, for anyone wondering), my murder mysteries came in cases of ten to twenty cassettes that interrupted the story every few hours to yell “INSERT TAPE TWELVE SIDE B.” The tapes held the magic of a liminal space, of safety without stagnation. We weren’t going to Disneyland; we were driving out into the middle of the desert so my grandma could make twenty-five to eighty dollars writing condition reports on empty properties for banks too cheap to hire appraisers. Ahead of us was usually the office where she worked, which meant either being bored or, because my family has always had a tenuous grasp of child labor laws, helping. Behind us was home, a place of uncertain chaos even when we didn’t have a gaggle of cousins, kids, aunts, dogs, goats, a pig, and – briefly one magical summer – two horses living with us. In the space between bored safety and anxious wildness, was the journey. Murder mysteries, with their dual promise of surprise and satisfaction, were the perfect backdrop. With my second book coming out, I have lost some of my element of surprise. Readers already familiar with my trickster orientation are cracking their knuckles and stretching for the test, and in response I am compelled to up my game and the complexity of the uncertainties I’ll deploy at them. But deep down they don’t want to win, and neither do I. I want to give readers the feeling of having someone they love gently guide them down the road with an endless stretch of blue sky softening the jagged landscape of Joshua Trees and scars from long dead rivers, laughing when the driver is too slow to turn down the volume at sex scenes or curse words, the excitement of the narrative and non-zero chance of seeing a coyote balanced out by the gentle lull of the tires under them and the certainty that they will safely arrive wherever they need to be. All of this, and this essay too, are just too many words for trust. *** View the full article
  19. I was 25 years old and had a novel written when someone named the feeling that has chased me my entire life. Survivor’s guilt. I sat on a Zoom call with someone I didn’t know, but who’d read my debut novel and used these two words to describe it like it was nothing more than a theme. She asked me how survivor’s guilt impacted me as a Syrian American. I stared back at her blankly. Some people search their whole lives for a diagnosis—visiting countless experts, regurgitating their symptoms—until they obtain the validation that comes with uncovering what is wrong with them. At first, I liked it: Two words that captured what I’d needed ninety thousand words of a novel to understand. They described the devastation I’d felt in the years of the Syrian Revolution and the exodus of Syrians that followed. Finally, I’d heard the two words that labeled how it feels to see a kid who looks like my mirror, who speaks in the same Arabic accent as me, who sings the same nursery rhymes as I sang, who roams the streets that I’ve memorialized in my head. I see that child on the news while they get killed on those same streets instead of me. To watch the boy like my brother in a shroud ready to be buried, his face a hue of gray that should never visit anyone’s face. To witness buildings, like my family’s apartments, blasted into a mountain of cement and dreams. To see orphans, like my nieces and nephews, searching for their martyred parents. To hear refugee mothers, like mine, scream at a camera that the world left them to die so what was the point of filming. In my Arab household, like all the others, we watched this happen uncensored, way before social media was around. No journalists who’d be better actresses, no blurring, no ushering the kids out of the room. Those of us in the diaspora—old, young, sick— we all bear witness. I don’t know of an Arab who wasn’t acquainted with watching bombings falling on their homelands on the news since childhood. Because the difference between us and them is an enraging stroke of fate and injustice that altered our birthplace and gave us this life instead of theirs. In another version of this world, I make the terrifying migration from my home in Damascus under fire and fear. I have never known a life without this rage that I am not there. This was what my life was before the Syrian Revolution changed me forever. But this started before 2011, this struggle has existed during the war on Iraq or the call for a free Palestine long before I was born. The connection to the Palestinian right to their homeland is the greatest cause for Muslims everywhere, and that has been a fight for decades. The Syrian and Palestinian dialects are similar; our communities are linked. When I tell other Arabs my last name, they ask if I come from the Palestinian family with the same name because our surnames don’t follow the borders drawn by foreign powers. In the Palestinian genocide in Gaza and in the increasing aggressions in Palestine, Syria, Lebanon, Iraq, and Yemen. Our pain and loss are intertwined and are felt at the deepest level. As the public’s awareness of the current Palestinian genocide grows, those of us who have lived with ‘survivor’s guilt’ for our whole lives can see that the people who have been recently visited by it are in the early stages of accepting it. Their denial, their rage, their spirals, we’ve felt it all before. There’s not much you can do once this ‘feeling’ comes, but here’s a heads up for the beginners. Survivor’s guilt is two words and meaningless. It is an attempt to categorize a feeling which fails to capture a way of life. You don’t wake up with more guilt some days than others, you don’t learn to cope, you don’t talk this away in therapy. For those of us well-versed in this existence, this becomes the way we move through the world. Because it never goes away, this feeling that it is hopeless and powerless. Guilt makes it sound like a curse, like it’s something I need to shake off to make myself right again. But I don’t remember a time before this, and nothing fills me with more purpose. Because movements are born where there is no hope or power. This “survivor’s guilt” isn’t my trauma—it’s my pride. I have all this empathy, this compassion, this understanding that most people might never truly feel. It’s an honor to be related to such a resilient people. It’s the string that pulls my chin up and the ringing in my voice when I say the words “I am Syrian.” It’s the shifting of soil when a grandmother says, “I am Palestinian.” It’s the only motivation I have to keep writing onto a blank paper or spitting my words at empty ears. Maybe this article, like all my writing, is another long-winded explanation of why I refuse to allow my experience to be diluted. Maybe my refusal is another act of inflicting pain on myself, an inability to accept that this will only ever be guilt. Survivor’s guilt. I’m grateful for these two words. I can pitch to publishers and outlets to write about this indescribable way of life because of them. They are why I get to write a blurb for my debut about a Syrian American confronting her privilege of being born in a Detroit suburb when she meets a Syrian refugee. How I can write my sophomore novel, Six Truths and a Lie, about six very different Muslim teenagers faced with criminal charges and an opposition determined to make them take the blame for a tragic attack. The kids point fingers at each other, frantically defending themselves, not knowing that at the expense of their freedom is watching others lose everything and the burden of our imaginary friend: survivor’s guilt. We are filled with their stories of the people we lost, the children we’re losing, our reflections who live on the other side of the world. Reem, “the soul of my soul.” Wael al-Dahdouh, the Al Jazeera journalist who buried his entire family after Israel massacred them. Refaat Alareer, the Palestinian writer who penned “If I Must Die” before being murdered in a targeted killing. Hind Rajab, a six-year-old Palestinian child whose call to the emergency responders lives in my head forever, was killed by Israeli forces in her car. They are the true poets, and our survival—if you can call it that—makes us their mouthpiece. *** View the full article
  20. I’d been told to wait at the airport for an official car to arrive. There were always detailed, specific instructions in case the car was late or didn’t show up at all. Under no circumstance was I, a single, unescorted woman, to get into a “taxi.” That would be “provocative” behavior, marking me as a woman looking for trouble, so instead I sat on an airport bench and waited. All too aware of the leering stares of men walking by, I unzipped my bag and retrieved the large shawl packed by Maggie, our housekeeper and lifelong friend. I draped it over my bare arms, eager to cover my pale skin. The next morning, I was to report to the field office. I was in my mid-twenties but already I’d grown accustomed to this routine, stopping in first thing to meet the local Chief of Station at the start of each new assignment abroad. I also looked forward to seeing an old friend, Judi. When I arrived at the Chief’s office the next morning, he was waving a flimsy sheet of paper in the air. It was an incoming cable from headquarters, and he held it between thumb and forefinger as if it were smoking hot. As his staff settled into nearby chairs, he read it aloud, his eyebrows rising and falling as he spoke: a terrorist group member whom the Chief had previously met in another country, on another assignment, was now attempting to make contact. The terrorist wanted to meet with him. Here. Now. According to this FLASH cable, which was the highest priority level of CIA communications, this terrorist was a rogue, and the lethal, razor-sharp edge of an emerging radical Islamist jihadi group. He’d already helped to bring down an American plane and was running from Interpol and the local intelligence service. He was also only a single step ahead of his own terrorist organization, which sought to assassinate him; he had gone rogue and now posed a danger to them as well. He was seeking safe harbor, and the Chief knew, as we did, that the meeting would have to take place soon. The terrorist claimed to have information about a planned hijacking of another American airline: Pan Am. That last line was the bait. This was urgent. The Chief immediately informed us—three case officers, an intel analyst, and one support person—that he would not attend the meeting alone. We would be there with him to keep our eyes on the bad dude who was summoning him. Above all, our job was to ensure that our boss did not leave the meeting with the terrorist under any circumstances. This guy was desperate. And dangerous. Capable of anything. I’d been flown in to direct a photo-training operation, but in the blink of an eye my assignment had changed. As a Disguise officer, I now had only hours to disguise our Chief, but I had brought no disguise materials with me. The Chief was tall with a scarred face and a noticeable Southern drawl. I asked a case officer to buy the largest shalwar kameez available and a pair of everyday sandals from the nearest market. I needed to make the Chief look local, understated. After coloring his blond hair black and adding a custom mustache from a disguise kit left behind by a recently departed case officer, I found a pair of outdated dark horn-rimmed glasses. I then applied a touch of Judi’s makeup to darken his complexion. I also gave him a cigar and a leather portfolio, suggesting he light the cigar and enter the lobby of the hotel like he owned the place. Once he was in disguise, the Chief transformed. He was a natural actor whose sheer size commanded respect. The goal was for him to be able to evaluate the situation, incognito, before deciding to make the meeting and reveal himself. The Chief was scared of this terrorist. So was I. The other officers and I then got busy de-Americanizing ourselves. We removed wedding rings, got rid of American cigarettes, and changed into locally bought clothes and shoes; items we each had in our closets for moments like this, when we needed to melt into the crowd. Separately, we made our way to the hotel, a glitzy American chain festooned with crystal chandeliers, miles of marble, and a small jungle of tropical palms in the lobby. I entered the lobby as the affluent tourist I was impersonating, maintaining a confident, slightly aloof demeanor as I silently catalogued the next several steps of our operational plan. “Hope you know what the hell you’re doing,” the nervous young guy in our group murmured as we went through the door together. I was a woman, which perhaps to him meant a weak link in the operational chain. Field work had long been considered the agency’s “real” work—men’s work. I said nothing but shot him a look. We’d arrived early to find observation points around the enormous, light-filled atrium lobby. We were all a bit jittery, a little charged up, and that was a good thing. My extensive training had taught me how to stay focused in these kinds of high-stakes circumstances; the nerves would ensure we stayed on point. It wasn’t just the Chief’s life on the line; it was potentially also a plane full of American passengers who would be at risk if this operation failed. The initial goal was for the Chief to see the terrorist first, which would allow him to abort if the meeting did not look or feel right. The guys in our group spread out among the other casuals, some sitting and others standing at different points in the lobby and bar, some reading newspapers while others ordered drinks. I chose a rug shop just off the lobby that had glass walls on three sides. I’d have a direct line of sight into the lobby, where the meeting would take place. As I entered the shop, nodding hello to the proprietor, I felt a bead of sweat trickle down my back, even as my hands felt cold from the hotel’s excessive air conditioning. Our housekeeper, Maggie, always ensured I had a supply of long-sleeved, ankle-length clothing in dark colors, plus numerous shawls, whenever I traveled to this part of the world, where female modesty rules, even as the heat smothers. I’d been able to put together a costume from my own suitcase: dark blue loose pants, a matching long-sleeved tunic with gold buttons, and a deep green and navy Varanasi dupatta, or stole. Still looking foreign, but, I hoped, not American, my brick-red lipstick allowed me to fit in with the hotel’s well-heeled, international clientele. The merchant offered me tea and I began looking at his inventory of Iranian carpets—Afshar and Shiraz in particular, which were rugs I already collected and knew enough about to sound like a serious customer. While the proprietor rolled out samples from his inventory, I kept a close eye on the lobby. As the meeting time approached, I got up and walked across the vibrantly colored spread of carpets. I then kneeled on the floor to appear to be examining them while also getting a better view of the meeting site. My heart was pounding when the Chief strode into the lobby with a larger-than-life demeanor. He sat down on a white sofa littered with silk cushions and casually began the elaborate ceremony of cutting and lighting his cigar as he scanned the lobby. That’s when I looked up—through the glass wall of the rug shop, across the hallway, and through another glass wall. Standing there, inside the newsstand, was the terrorist. He was short, about 5’4″, and dressed in a typical beige shalwar kameez. He was flanked by two huge, turbaned guards—Pashtuns, I guessed—each with a Kalashnikov slung unapologetically over his shoulder. This terrorist was being hunted, yet here he was, boldly announcing his presence with his heavily armed companions. It was a shocking sight, and the hotel staff clearly knew enough not to object to this open display of power. As I stared across the hallway, the terrorist suddenly looked at me. We made eye contact. Eye contact is connection, recognition. It is personal. It’s also something CIA operatives are trained not to do. As our eyes locked on one another, I suddenly felt trapped inside an invisible, almost electric circuit. His gaze remained fixed on me, like a laser beam cutting right through my disguise, for what felt like an eternity. He wanted me to know that he knew. This is it. They’re going to shoot me. I was exposed, with no easy way out. Frozen in place on my hands and knees, my mind flashed back to the Wall of Stars in the lobby of CIA Headquarters in Langley. Made of white Alabama marble, each star is carved with care and precision, each one representing a CIA employee who died in the line of duty. Some are named, but many are not. Their identities will never be known. They died in faraway places, serving their country, often under cover. Even their families may never know the real story. They remain unseen, even in death. With each passing second that the terrorist held my stare I felt increasingly sure I was about to die. No one would ever know what had happened to me. I was traveling incognito; officially I was not there. Then suddenly, he hesitated. He looked down and turned away. With his bodyguards in tow, he walked into the lobby and toward the Chief. He’d made me, then moved on. As he receded down the hallway, my blood ran cold. I had never encountered what felt like pure evil before. I was stunned by its power. I felt chilled, my breathing shallow, my pulse pounding in my ears, deafening. Lucky. This is what luck looks like. Once the Chief’s meeting with the terrorist concluded, we dispersed, exiting the hotel one by one at different times. That evening I went to Judi’s place to have a drink. If the men were gathering to celebrate, I was certainly not invited. Nor was she. The next day the local English language newspaper reported the terrorist’s arrest by local police. True, but only after the Chief had debriefed him on the hijacking threat. He told the Chief that he had identified four of his people in the hotel; I was one of them. Those details did not appear in the news the next morning. Decades later I still vividly remember the rush of cold terror that ran through me as my eyes locked with the terrorist’s. It is one thing to read classified, internal reports about terrorism as part of your job; it is entirely another to be face-to-face with a man known for his ruthless brutality. Still, it was these types of ops that kept me hooked to a career that was as exciting as it was challenging. As often happened, the final outcome remained a mystery. Sometimes I would learn the result of an operation weeks after I’d played my part, but oftentimes I knew only details related to my specific contributions. Inside the CIA information is currency, both precious and potentially dangerous. At nearly all levels of the food chain, information is siloed on a need-to-know basis. I had to trust that the role I was playing was important, a necessary component of a bigger picture I would probably never see. Success earned no applause, and none was expected. That was the nature of the work, and of the job. It was a career I loved. I was doing work that mattered, work that made a difference—making history in some small way. It wasn’t a path I’d ever imagined for myself. I was, after all, just a girl from Wichita, Kansas, seeking adventure, never dreaming that would translate into a life that was both covert and trailblazing. ___________________________________ Excerpted from In True Face: A Woman’s Life in the CIA, Unmasked by Jonna Mendez. Copyright © 2024. Available from PublicAffairs, an imprint of Hachette Book Group, Inc. View the full article
  21. In the labyrinthine world of crime fiction, few elements stir the plot’s pot as effectively as sibling bonds. The mercurial relationships between sisters and brothers carry lifetimes of camaraderie, shorthand, grudges, tiny triumphs, and shared histories. They can be crucibles for narrative tension and foundations for epic plot twists. I believe that when siblings are centered in mysteries—particularly those interested in intersectional feminism and queer and trans identities—the narrative stakes feel amplified and nuanced. These four novels show us how sibling relationships can be much more than backdrops or backstories in crime fiction, supercharging narratives with primal terror and emotional range. My Sister, the Serial Killer Oyinkan Braithwaite’s narrative is a case study in scalpel-sharp dark humor, inventive scene work, and sisterhood reimagined. The bond between sisters Korede and Ayoola is constantly tested, not by quotidian squabbles, but by a string of boyfriends who end up dead (murdered in cold blood, in fact). Braithwaite keeps this tensile book alert with vital questions of loyalty and survival, threading gender and societal commentary into an incredibly tight ripper. The novel doesn’t just entertain, which it absolutely does; it dissects the very essence of “sisterly duty,” drenching a crime narrative with resonant explorations of PTSD, where and how trauma is stored in the body, and complex ethical decisions. I teach this book in my “Plotting the Perfect Crime” course, a plot-centric crime writing class at Emerson College; it’s illuminating to see how the MFA students celebrate the novel’s fine-tuned craft, confident plotting, emotional wreckage, humor, and creative quotient. I love books that offer a dialect—asking how two apparent opposites are simultaneously true? This narrative is distinct in its ability to balance withering satire with poignant insights into the love and sacrifice of sisters who just want to survive and thrive in an unfair world. Dark Places Buckle up. Gillian Flynn’s Dark Places is a visceral journey through the lacerating understory of memory, pain, and perception, where the inimitable Libby Day and her incarcerated brother, Ben, navigate the aftermath of their family’s brutal massacre on a Kansas farm. Libby was the only survivor of the wretched mass killing, and Ben’s been locked up for the crime for more than 20 years. Flynn’s craftsmanship in a nonlinear structure, multiple PoVs, and astonishing character depth transforms this sibling story into a gutting exploration of truth and reconciliation. The tension is palpable.The humor is a tonic. The pace is addictive. The writing writhes with dark poetry. The threat and promise of sibling understanding charge this book. Though Libby and Ben Day build all sorts of armor to deny it, the siblings are so desperate to be seen and feel a sense of belonging. I’ve honestly never read anything like this or felt how something so dark could be so sublimely beautiful. Bonus: Gillian Flynn will be showrunning and adapting Dark Places as a streaming series for HBO. Anyone who saw HBO’s revelatory adaptation of her brilliant Sharp Objects is eagerly counting down the days for this one. Like a Sister Kellye Garrett’s Like a Sister is a gold-standard. This sensational mystery rages with wisdom, heart, wit, exceptional plotting, and urgency. The novel is centered around Lena Scott’s quest to unearth the truth of the awful death of her half-sister’s death, Desiree Pierce, a reality TV star who was found dead in a playground. Garrett brilliantly juxtaposes Lena’s personal quest with a broader commentary on media’s insidiousness, race, and societal occlusions, crafting a narrative that’s as exigent and alert as it is gripping. The sibling dynamic here is the guiding force that drives the story through grief, deception, and injustice. It’s electrified by the spirit of women bound by blood and driven by a hunt for truth. Like a Sister defines the contemporary mystery canon; it is a must-read for every crime fiction fan. Killingly In Katharine Beutner’s richly lyrical and indelible tale of family duty, friendship, societal pressures, and pain, we’re transported to the bracing Massachusetts of 1897. Bertha Mellish, “the most peculiar, quiet, reserved girl” at iconic Mount Holyoke College, goes missing. As a search team searches the pond where Bertha might have drowned, her panicked sister Florence and her father try to find her. Amidst the chaos and fear is Agnes, Bertha’s closest friend, whose intellect and solitary nature mask her own turbulent emotions. As a student of medicine (rare for women back then), Agnes is no stranger to the clinical dissection of facts. So why is she reticent to share info with Florence or the PI hired by the family? Florence is determined to crack the facade and find her sister before it’s too late. But will she? And how well can we ever truly know a sibling or their truth? Blessed Water Queer sibling questions fuel the storm of Blessed Water, a novel I wrote as a blistering sequel to Scorched Grace, the first book in the Sister Holiday Mystery series with Gillian Flynn Books/Zando. Blessed Water is a sibling study within a ticking-clock mystery told in three suspenseful acts—Good Friday, Saturday, and Easter Sunday. I wanted to add another line of inquiry to the queer storytelling ecosystem that I started with Scorched Grace, and I gave Blessed Water a unique cadence and different suite of obsessions. The story opens again with Sister Holiday, who remains a punk, queer, chain-smoking nun. But she’s also apprenticing the wry Maggie Riveaux at the newly formed Redemption Detective Agency, one step closer to her dream of becoming a private eye. When Sister Holiday sets out to meet their first client, she finds the slashed up body of a priest floating in the Mississippi River. The very same morning that Holiday pulls the body out of the water, a terrible storm gathers strength and Holiday’s brother, Moose, an army medic, mysteriously shows up in New Orleans. Moose is tightlipped about his sudden appearance. What’s he hiding? Or whom? As she tries to piece together the clues and track down the murder, Sister Holiday grapples with her grief and distrust of her brother, and her role in his dismantling. Holiday was the lesbian older sister who could have helped her gay younger brother find his way, but she didn’t. Can she heal the past by changing the future? Or, are old sibling dynamics fixed and cycles of violence destined to repeat? *** These are just a small sample of the many crime narratives invested in complex and idiosyncratic sibling relationships. They show how inherent family drama and emotional friction can amplify tension and enrich the thematic development. From the brilliant and macabre twists in Braithwaite’s work to Flynn’s darkly luminous character studies, the sibling bond is a formidable force. The ties that bind can be as potent as any dredged secret or hard-won revelation. –Featured image: Caino e Abele, Titian, 1543–1545 View the full article
  22. When people first meet authors, they always ask the same question—how did you get started in this business? I’m a bit a rarity. Wrote my first novel at seventeen, sold it at twenty, hit the bestseller lists at twenty-eight. Trust me, if you’d told my 12-year old bookworm self, armed with a library pass and overactive imagination, that this would be my life, I never would’ve believed it. And yet, a sometimes heartbreaking, always incredible three decades later, here I am. Better yet, here’s what I’ve learned along the way. 1. Write from the Heart Needless to say, I’ve sat through a lot of advice on trends over the years. Write whatever you want to write…but make it about vampires. Wait, domestic suspense is in…or is it international thrillers…unreliable narrators…books with the word girl/she/her in the title? These fads are all true and yet none of them matter. As writers, we think in story. Good news, so do readers. What is the best thing you can possibly be writing right now? The book that keeps knocking at your mental door. At seventeen, I had this scene I couldn’t get out of my head—a woman who ran a shelter for homeless youths, witnessing a murder one night, and the killer spotting her. Maybe other people dream of rainbows and fluffy bunnies, but clearly they were never meant for crime fiction. 2. Always Respect Your Readers… So I drafted a novel. A truly dreadful story where plot holes were abundant and plot twists few and far between. Which I dutifully sent off to acquisition editors to earn some of my first feedback. The critique that most stuck with me—readers are too smart for you to write this stupid (harsh but true). This editor also introduced me to one of the basic tenants of thriller writing that I’ve adhered to till this day—true plot complications come from the good guys doing everything exactly right, but the bad guys being smarter, faster, better. This is what readers expect and deserve, a true battle of wits. If you don’t know what’s going to happen next or how your character is going to get out of this terrible predicament, perfect. Now you’re on the right track. Keep chugging. 3. …But Don’t Read the Reviews! A mere three years of revision work later, I sold my first novel. And yes, I absolutely cried the first time I saw my novel in a bookstore. Then I discovered the torturous world of reviews. Reader A loved this about my novel. Reader B thinks that was terrible, but did appreciate this element, which by the way, Reader C strongly feels I could’ve done without. Readers are smart. I am one, after all. And the first thing I had to remember is that no one shares the same opinion. Part of the whole fun of book clubs is debating what everyone liked and didn’t like in a novel. As a writer, however, you must believe in your own instincts, or you’ll never reach The End. And yes, some days, this is the hardest and loneliest part of the job. 4. Change Is Good After selling my first book, I wrote a dozen more romantic-suspense novels. But I found myself getting restless. I loved the character-driven approach. However, I was also more and more fascinated by police procedure. I wanted to include more details, which rapidly became too much for the genre. One of the toughest moments of my career, realizing I had bigger ideas for bigger books which would involve change—publisher, agent, you name it. Terrifying stuff for a barely making it author. And yet, sitting down to draft my first true thriller, The Perfect Husband, became positively invigorating. All artists have an internal voice speaking to them, sometimes even screaming. Listen to that voice, even when it seems impossible, and great things may happen next (or not, but don’t worry, the voice will suggest another option; no one said success was easy). 5. Don’t Get Attached to Bestseller Lists My second thriller, The Other Daughter hit the New York Times bestseller list. This was it, what all the hard work and heartache had been about. Then I sat down the next day to gleefully type away and realized…I had nothing. Blank screen remained the blank screen. Apparently, novel number three didn’t actually care about my sales success with novel number two. Which turns out to be the point. Bestseller lists are about publishing success, but writing is always writing. That’s between you, the blinking cursor and the voices in your head (and possibly your loyal canine/feline companions). I remember early in my career listening to a talk by Jayne Ann Krentz aka Amanda Quick aka Jayne Castle. Someone asked her the secret to her success. Her answer: writing. (insert mic drop here) 6. Careers Aren’t Linear After hitting the New York Times bestseller list a mere ten years into my career, I became an ‘overnight success.’ Except, pressure was now on to sell even more books across more countries in more markets. Which sometimes actually happened, and sometimes didn’t. There were covers we realized were a problem after the fact. Publishing dates we definitely regretted. Logistical, international, cosmic difficulties that derailed best laid plans. And when that happens…you write the next novel, and the one after that and the one after that. And maybe you go from standalone (The Other Daughter) to series (Detective D.D. Warren) to an entirely different series (missing persons expert Frankie Elkin). Keep excited, keep believing and good things will happen. 7. Reward Your Efforts Writing is hard! I keep waiting to feel like I’ve mastered the craft and can spit out high-stakes thrillers every time I sit at the computer. Nope. Creating something from nothing is torturous. Period. And yet this is what we do. So respect your inner artist. For whatever reason, the first 100 pages of each novel taunt me. When I cross that threshold, I get a reward—maybe dinner at a special restaurant or a day off to binge read a favorite author, whatever works. This business isn’t meant to be easy, so appreciate and acknowledge the effort. It will keep you going even on the bad days. 8. Never Stop Reading I can’t believe how many authors say they don’t read anymore. Seriously? Books are what got me into this mess; I’m not giving them up now. My fav Christmas gift, a debut novel, Mother Daughter Murder Night by Nina Simon that I’m now reading in a book club with yes, my mother and my daughter. How cool is that? Novels, like every other art form, are constantly evolving and changing. I love discovering that next new voice that blows me away (Riley Sager a few years ago) or an existing author whose work I’ve stupidly missed (Simone St. James, whose entire backlist made for a happy month of binge reading). It’s good to be humbled and in awe. It provides incentive to forge ahead. 9. Make Friends When I first started out, my publisher sent me on book tour with fellow authors to grow our mutual careers. Two of my early tour buddies: Karin Slaughter and Tess Gerritsen. Trust me, there’s nothing like three weeks of airline peanuts to forge lifelong bonds. People often think of authors as having adversarial relationships. Absolutely not. Another person who hears voices in their head telling them how to get away with murder? Can’t wait to meet them! God knows my own family doesn’t want to sit through one more lecture on the merits of plotting versus pantsing. Join a writers group, find your people and thirty years later you don’t just have a career, you have a community, and that makes all the difference. 10. Always Enjoy the Ride In the beginning, all you want to do is sell your first book. Then you want to sell more books. Hit a bestseller list. Hit higher on that list, stay longer. Next thing you know, your entire career has gone by with you still waiting to feel like you made it. Want to know a secret? Writers are way too neurotic for such sentiments. Let it go. Enjoy each new and exciting idea. Bask in the glory of an afternoon where the words on the page are even better than the ones you had in your head. Celebrate the first time, fifth time, hundredth time of reaching The End. When I initially considered writing about Franke Elkin, changing up from police procedurals to an amateur sleuth who specializes in missing persons cold cases, I was terrified. Then I was electrified. What was once old, became new again. And now, thirty years later, here I go again, down the rabbit hole of creating my next thriller in a sometimes heartbreaking, but always incredible business. Time to get to work. *** View the full article
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  24. I am a pony. But not just any pony. I am a pony who is bent on revenge. I am the Iago of ponies, a furry Fury. I am both adorable and devious, and, until I get what I want, I’m going to make every human I meet pay for your collective crimes. I am a tiny, mop-topped demon, and I am coming for you. Picture a riding stable. If you haven’t been in one, a row of horses hang their heads over their stall doors, gently bobbing to escape the flies, pricking their ears when a human appears who might have a carrot or a peppermint in her pocket. In the riding arena, a sandy rectangle outlined by a white wooden fence that could use a coat of paint, there’s a small dapple gray pony named Boo Boo carrying a girl named Kimmie over a row of low jumps under the watchful eye of Phee, her instructor. It’s all so sickeningly sweet, right? Boo Boo looks happy, lifting his forelegs and sailing over the crossbars in a perfect arc, his tail a lush banner in the breeze. Kimmie and Boo Boo come to a stop near Phee, who is very tall and wears tan jodhpurs and tall black boots and a ball cap. The pony gives a happy sneeze, knowing he has done his job well. Kimmie takes her skinny legs, folded at the knee like a stepladder, out of the stirrups and they hang down below the edge of the pony’s belly. “We’ve got to lengthen those stirrups,” says the instructor. “You’ll get a cramp.” Kimmie frowns. “The judges won’t like it. And my feet are going to hit the poles. It’s fine.” Kimmie’s mom calls out from where she’s leaning on the fence, holding the leash of a Labrador retriever who is sniffing for crumbs. “She looks big for the pony,” says the mom, removing her sunglasses and squinting from under a straw hat. “Is she getting too big for him?” “Mom,” says Kimmie, “he’s such a good boy.” “I know, but you look ridiculous,” says the mom. “I don’t want to sell him.” “Well, we can’t afford to keep two animals. If you want to keep riding, you need to move up to a horse.” Kimmie slumps forward like a rag doll and throws her arms around the pony’s neck. She will never agree to part with her beloved pony, the pony who has carried her safely and dutifully over hundreds of obstacles, through rivers, up and down mountains, in parades, the pony who did not protest when forced to wear antlers at Christmas, bunny ears at Easter, and large wings at Halloween. Surely all that is worth more than— “Can I get a Thoroughbred?” Kimmie asks. Now turn your gaze back to the stable nearby. Inside that stable there’s another pony. A heck of a pony, if I do say so myself. I was once, like Boo Boo, a good boy. Not anymore. Fifteen summers ago, I had my own little girl just like Kimmie. Her name was Penny. Penny and I did everything together. Then one day out of the blue she up and sold me. With no warning she kicked me to the curb like an old bicycle or a Slinky that no longer slinks. After Penny cast me adrift, I floated from home to home, islands in the sea of life. I was eventually bought by Phee for children to take riding lessons on. (A lucky few kids will end up owning their own ponies, but most will ride lesson ponies until they either discover romance or get tall enough to ride horses, or both.) Phee is not a bad person—she’s quiet and sensible, like an oak tree, and she gets along with all the children and parents by never contradicting them, at least not out loud. (I have been privy to some muttering.) Despite the dislike for humans that simmers in me thanks to Penny, I dutifully carried the children Phee trains and coaches for years on end, circling the damn arena, trotting over crossbars. I’m getting older now, and I figured Phee would retire me at some point soon and let me live out my final years in peace and quiet in the pasture behind the barn. If well cared for, ponies can live to thirty or even forty years old, and after twenty years of being a fairly good boy, all things, considered, I felt I had some well-earned leisure coming my way. Then last week, in a deeply, deeply tragic misunderstanding, my reputation and my retirement plans went permanently south after I dumped one too many “future Olympians” into the dust of the riding ring. Excerpt continues after cover reveal. In my defense, Peacock Lastrigon had it coming. Peacock’s family owns a chain of burger joints, the Hungry Cannibal. At age ten, Peacock has an astounding faith in his own wonderfulness. All of us should have a day of walking around in Peacock’s skin, just to experience what total self-confidence feels like. As you might expect, he is oblivious to any evidence of his shortcomings. When he fails a test, it’s the teacher’s fault. When his friend Tip shunned him after Peacock called him stupid, Tip was too thin-skinned and couldn’t take a joke. When Peacock tripped and fell on the playground, it was the playground’s fault and his family demanded it be repaved. In short, Peacock is a monster. In stories, people like Peacock get punished. In life, they get prizes. Peacock loves to win horse shows. This means that Phee trains me, schools me, grooms me, cleans my saddle and polishes my bridle, and drives me to the show location. There, ringside, pug-nosed Peacock is hoisted into the freshly oiled saddle. We go into the arena, walk and trot around, maybe jump a little obstacle or two, then line up for the judges. Peacock is usually awarded a blue ribbon, further proof that he’s better than everyone else. The best. I get nothing. Phee gets a crisp white envelope from Peacock’s parents and drives me home. We were ringside at a huge showgrounds that fateful day. The wind was up, and flags were flapping in the breeze. Hundreds of horses and ponies milled around, their hair in tiny rows of braids like mine, riders in black coats and helmets. Everyone looked serious, like this all mattered a lot to them. The loudspeaker called our class. Phee whispered to me before Peacock got on. “Be good,” she said with more urgency than usual. After all, it was cool and breezy, which has the same effect on a pony as a tequila shot on a college freshman. I should have listened to her, just toughed out the three minutes before Peacock would dismount and I would get my hay and go home. But as Peacock bounced on my back, spurred my sides, and yanked my mouth, a rage began to simmer and then boil inside me. Must the Peacocks of the world always win? I thought about Penny, and how much I wanted to make her pay for discarding me like a bag of trash all those years ago, the primal wound that changed the course of my life forever. Must she, too, remain unpunished for her callousness? As Peacock kicked me toward a brush jump, I saw my opportunity. Hundreds of people were watching. I headed for the fence, then at the last second took a sharp left. The crowd groaned. Unfortunately, Peacock had an iron-fisted grasp on the reins and he didn’t come off, but he did shift his center of gravity in the saddle. Feeling my chance, I ducked my right shoulder and gave a buck, then a twist while I was in the air. Honestly, in a gymnastics competition I would have scored a perfect ten. The crowd gasped at the unexpected rodeo. Show ponies never behaved like this, dutiful little drones that we are. I like to think I heard an undercurrent of joy, if not admiration in that gasp. And that last twisting bronco-style buck did it—Peacock came off with a thud, and a small cloud of dust rose around him. The crowd was on its feet, waiting to see if he was hurt. His face as he sat there was red, red, red and then an AHHHHH! burst out of him like a pimple erupting. He continued screaming in rage as he leapt to his feet. The crowd clapped politely. Phee rushed toward him pulling the signed release form up on her phone, as did his parents, speed-dialing their lawyers. I was caught by a judge and escorted from the ring. I can’t describe how good it felt to leave Peacock in the dust, howling. I wished he were Penny, but close enough. However, it’s possible I was too clever for my own good, because now no one wants to ride me. Phee’s lawyer has advised her not to use me for lessons. I thought maybe this would simply move up my retirement date, but apparently Phee thinks she can still get some money for me. Money. That’s what I am to you humans. What all we ponies are. You make us think we’re beloved family members (I’m looking at you, Penny!) and then you put a dollar sign on our heads and send us off with anyone who coughs up the cash. To add insult to insult, Phee has shut the stall door and I can’t see over it. All I see are four bare walls and the sawdust on the floor. It’s like a prison cell. And the empty hay rack! The hay rack is full for two painfully brief periods each day. It only takes eight minutes for me to vacuum it clean again. Pathetic. Cruel. They say it’s so I don’t get fat, but I tell you I’m wasting away inside this deceptively plump, round body. I eat, then I’m bored for the next eleven hours and fifty-two minutes. This has given me a lot of time to plan my next steps. And now I’m putting my plan into action. Starting today, I am going to really get back at you humans. Especially you, Penny. Peacock is bad, but you are the worst. Enough with the Gandhi-style passive resistance in which I just refuse to do what people want. I’m going guerrilla. From this day on, I am devoting my life to finding you, Penny, and confronting you for selling me all those many years ago. You couldn’t even look me in the face and tell me why you did it. That’s what I want from you. An explanation. And an apology. There is no statute of limitations on your crime. Yes, you seemed to be a sweet little girl, but who better than an adorable pony to see through that ruse? I know what you are and I am going to make you pay for it. If a person happened to be standing outside my stall, they would hear scraping, banging, and chewing, as if a master carpenter is at work—please do not compare this sound to that made by a large rodent. Then, after an hour or so of this noise, they would see a small nose with two delicate nostrils (my princely ancestry is evident in my nose) appear at the top of the half door. Then they would see the door push open from the inside. Ta-da! Here I am! I’m drinking in the sight of the surprised horses, the clean-swept barn aisle, and sturdy Phee, who has her back turned to me a few feet away. I am exactly as you imagine me. Small and furry. I’m the color of the sun itself, a blazing incandescent gold with crème brûlée and burnt cork accents. I do not want to hear you describe me as “beige,” “toast,” or “tan.” And I’ve got a lotta hair. I’m not ashamed to say I’m proud of my hair, a thick shaggy mane that breaks even metal combs and a tail that sends flies into the next county with a single swish. They call me Houdini here. This is my superpower. I can escape from anywhere. I successfully chew the latch off the stall door and hold it in my teeth. I drop it to the ground with a clatter that makes Phee turn. She has one glass eye, but the expression in the real one is priceless: shock and anger. I bolt at top speed not away, but toward her, messing with her head, which outrages her more, and I run past her as she yells at me to stop. Yeah, right, sister. I run down the stable aisle, under the belly of a big dumb Friesian horse so huge he barely notices me. I knock over a ten-year-old boy named Thad who dares to try to stop me, and just for good measure, I also kick over a manure cart. Two foofy Thoroughbreds named Sandalwood and Lioness are on crossties being groomed to a high shine and are spooked by my ruckus. They rear up, the whites of their eyes showing. A black Labrador flees, tail between his legs. I pause just long enough to grab a carrot from outside the stall of an uptight and ulcer-prone Arabian gelding named Jiffy as I bolt past. I carry the stolen carrot in my teeth, like a matador with a rose, as I burst out of the barn and flee for the territory ahead. I delight to hear the cries of Phee: “Loose horse! Would someone grab that darn pony?” I run around a corner, hell-bent on getting out of there for good and hitting the road to find Penny, but instead I find nirvana: an expanse of green grass. Why have I not been shown this before? Why am I not here all the time? My anger at the rank unfairness of the world cools briefly as I settle in for a good snack. After all, I will need strength to complete my quest. I snatch huge mouthfuls of grass as fast as I can. It’s hard to chew with that much grass in my mouth, so I spit out a wad and start over. I position myself under some trees that will be good for scratching once I have eaten just seven or eight more bites. Maybe ten. Then I will hit the road. Insects buzz around me. The sun warms my back. Life, dear reader, is good. Phee comes out of the barn with a bucket of grain. I need to leave, now, but I am powerless to resist her. Oats are my Achilles’ heel. I follow her back into the barn. She locks me in the stall. A familiar sign is tacked to the door. pony for sale. __________________________________ From PONY CONFIDENTIAL. Used with the permission of the publisher, BERKLEY. Copyright © 2024 by CHRISTINA LYNCH. All rights reserved. View the full article
  25. Another week, another batch of books for your TBR pile. Happy reading, folks. * Lisa Gardner, Still See You Everywhere (Grand Central) “Gardner skillfully weaves threats into this pitch-perfect variation of the locked-room mystery, pitting ‘missing person finder’ Frankie Elkin against an untamed tropical environment, a raging serial killer, a diabolical saboteur, and her own misleading tunnel vision… Gardner’s Frankie Elkin series gets more magnetizing with each installment.” –Booklist Deanna Raybourn, A Grave Robbery (Berkley) “The ninth Veronica Speedwell book, following A Sinister Revenge, spins off Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein. It’s possibly the best in the series, with Raybourn’s trademark banter, innuendo, and outstanding lead characters, along with a fascinating plot and supporting cast.” –Library Journal Chris Harding Thornton, Little Underworld (MCD) “Thornton laces the hardboiled narrative with welcome flashes of dark humor.” –Publishers Weekly Kristen Bird, Watch It Burn (MIRA) “Readers can count on author Bird to write a twisty tale about the dark side of suburban perfection. Recommend to fans of authors Kimberly McCreight and Freida McFadden.” –Booklist Aggie Blum Thompson, Such a Lovely Family (Forge) “Thompson gives each of her vivid characters plausible motives and overlapping secrets, effectively laying the groundwork for a cascade of plot twists, each more jolting than the last. The end result is a decadent, stay-up-all-night page-turner.” —Publishers Weekly Margot Douaihy, Blessed Water (Gillian Flynn Books) “Douaihy follows up Scorched Grace with another deliriously enjoyable, relentlessly plotted adventure for chain-smoking “punk nun” Sister Holiday Walsh…. This series continues to impress.” –Publishers Weekly Charles Ardai, Death Comes Too Late (Hard Case Crime) “Ardai’s best stories walk a tightrope between noir fatalism and surprising invention. Some of them boast unsettlingly original premises [and] endings bound to startle the most hard-bitten fan… Readers who limit themselves to one story a night are in for a lot of sleepless nights.” –Kirkus Reviews Juan Gómez-Jurado, Black Wolf (Minotaur) “Propulsive… Gómez-Jurado continues to skillfully render the inner workings of Scott’s hyperactive mind, and the action in this installment is even more relentless than the series opener. Admirers of Stieg Larsson’s Millennium novels will eat this up.” –Publishers Weekly Tamron Hall, Watch Where They Hide (William Morrow) “This is a fast-paced and propulsive mystery with plenty of background information about what it’s like to be a journalist, clearly informed by Hall’s career as an Emmy-winning TV journalist. Readers in the Chicagoland area especially will appreciate the author’s nods to the Windy City.” –Booklist KD Alden, Lady Codebreaker (Forever) “Alden handles it all with tenderness, compassion and truth, and I was deeply immersed throughout.” –Historical Novel Society View the full article
  26. Mention the word “thriller” in the same sentence as Washington, D.C., and most people conjure up fast-paced tales of spies, political intrigue, and military operations. Mystery and thriller writers like David Baldacci, Margaret Truman, Julie Hyzy, and Tom Clancy, to name just a few, have had huge success mining the halls of power at the Capitol or settings like the White House. But there’s more to the DMV— as locals call the District, Maryland, and Virginia — than politics. It’s a city like any other, a place where ordinary people navigate relationships, raise families, care for ailing parents, and occasionally stumble across a dead body. All three of my domestic suspense novels have been set in the D.C. area, and there’s not an FBI or CIA agent among them. My most recent, Such a Lovely Family, tells the story of the wealthy Calhoun family, whose afternoon garden party turns into a crime scene when a brutal murder takes place. I set it in the fictional Somerwood neighborhood, which is based on a real neighborhood in Chevy Chase, Md. whose explosion of cherry blossoms every spring draws visitors from near and far. I’m not the only one writing about the other D.C. — there’s been a recent spate of non-political thrillers set in the nation’s capital. Following is a list of five such works, with a corresponding hidden (or not-so-hidden) gem to visit related to each book. In Follow Me, Kathleen Barber’s tale of taut psychological suspense, Audrey Miller moves to D.C. and lands a job as the head of social media at a Smithsonian art museum. But things start to go haywire when someone who has been obsessively following her on social media for years—from her first WordPress blog to her most recent Instagram story — crosses the line into her real life. What to visit: the Smithsonian’s Hirschhorn Sculpture Garden, where you can see modern sculptures and enjoy a cup of coffee in a quiet spot hiding in plain sight along the National Mall. Psychological thriller duo Greer Hendricks and Sarah Pekkanen’s The Golden Couple follows the DC couple Marissa and Matt as they come under the sway of an unconventional therapist named Avery, who has lost her license due to her unorthodox methods. This twisty thriller mentions several well-known landmarks in the Glover Park section of Northwest D.C., where the couple lives. What to visit: The National Cathedral, just up the hill from Glover Park. The central tower is the highest point in Washington, D.C., but one of the better-kept secrets is the beautiful Bishop’s Garden adjacent to the cathedral. Stop in for a light lunch or coffee at the quaint Open City Café, which is on the grounds. The Monsters We Defy, by Leslye Penelope, marries a heist story with African-American folk magic set in the Harlem Renaissance-inspired Washington, D.C. of 1925. The main character, Clara Johnson, is born with “the gift,” enabling her to commune with spirits. Penelope paints an evocative picture of a lesser-known D.C. — a world of segregation, speakeasies, race riots, and U Street’s once bustling “Black Broadway.” What to visit: Start at Ben’s Chili Bowl on U Street. The building housing one of D.C.’s most famous eateries was originally the Minnehaha Nickelodeon Theater in 1910, and the façade is still visible. From there, take a walking tour of the neighborhood that includes the former residences of Langston Hughes and Duke Ellington, and the historic Lincoln and Howard Theaters. Maps of walking tours are available online at: https://blackbroadwayonu.com The Senator’s Wife by Liv Constantine may sound like the title of a political thriller, but this psychological suspense explores a rocky second marriage, rife with gaslighting and suspicion. After the tragic deaths of their respective spouses two years earlier, Sloane Chase and Senator Whit Montgomery marry in the hopes of moving on with their lives. Felled by illness in her beautiful Georgetown home, Sloane struggles with who she can trust as she fights to uncover what happened to her first husband. What to visit: Georgetown, where you can dine at Café Milano, which makes an appearance in the book and has been dubbed by The New York Times as “Where the world’s most powerful people go.” If the prices there are a little steep, there are plenty of other eateries and cafes nearby. Take your coffee down to the waterfront, and if you’re up for it, walk the mile along the Potomac River to the Lincoln Memorial. In Never Saw Me Coming by Vera Kurian, a college campus is the setting. D.C. is home to several schools, including Georgetown, American, George Washington, and Catholic Universities, as well as the University of the District of Columbia. But this thriller is set at the fictitious John Adams University. There, Chloe Sevre, a freshman honor student who also happens to be a psychopath, is one of seven students offered a scholarship in return for participating in a psychology study. What to visit: Catholic University, the site of the stunning Basilica of the National Shrine of the Immaculate Conception. Nicknamed “America’s Catholic Church,” it’s the largest Catholic church building in North America. You can tour the church and its well-appointed gardens. And finally, sometimes the scariest areas of a big city are right outside its limits — the suburbs. Melissa Adelman’s What the Neighbors Saw is set in an exclusive neighborhood in Northern Virginia where the only thing bigger than the houses is the sense of entitlement. When Alexis moves with her husband into a fixer-upper, she feels like an outsider as the only woman of color on the block. But soon she is sucked into the neighborhood drama when a dead body is found on a nearby jogging path. What to visit: Park your car at Daingerfield Island and walk along the Potomac River into picturesque Old Town Alexandria, where you can grab a bite, stroll the cobbled streets, and browse the many little boutiques. *** View the full article
  27. What could be more destabilizing—or trail more fascinating narrative threads—than a person vanishing without a trace? It’s no mystery why countless authors kick off their books with people gone missing. Marry this trope with speculative fiction, and you’ve got stories whose possibilities are literally limitless. In my new book, The Bad Ones, four people vanish from around a wintry suburb in a single night. The best friend of one of the lost learns that a slumber party game centered around a figure of local lore is key in unlocking the mystery. Here are six more supernatural and horror-inflected stories in which vanishings drive the plot. Knock Knock, Open Wide, by Neil Sharpson Twenty years ago college girl Etain left a party in the middle of the night, driving alone into the wilds of rural Ireland. She was found days later, forever changed by the nightmare she survived. What happened to her colors her entire future and that of her husband and daughters—one who vanished in childhood, the other, Ashling, marked by her toxic relationship with an alcoholic mother who can hardly bear to look at her since her other child vanished. But Ashling knows what no one will ever believe: her sister’s disappearance has everything to do with a local children’s television show and a box on set that must never be opened, containing the wicked entity that took her sister away. This is a family horror story threaded through with cult activity and terrifying Celtic mythology, its mysteries revealed with tantalizing precision. House of Hollow, by Krystal Sutherland Once upon a time three small sisters disappeared beneath their parents’ gaze, seemingly into thin air. When the trio returned a month later, they were dreadfully altered: hair paled, throats scarred, all their lost baby teeth restored. Worst of all is their ability to mesmerize those around them, whether they want to or not. In the decade since, eldest sister Grey Hollow has become an iconic and elusive fashion designer of darkly dreamlike clothes. When she disappears, youngest sister Iris—the one least comfortable with their strangeness—sets out to find her with the help of wild middle sister Vivi and Grey’s model boyfriend. Their haunted journey takes them through a darkly enchanted London and into even stranger places beyond. The Women Could Fly, by Megan Giddings Giddings creates an insidiously plausible world in which witchcraft is real and highly regulated, used as a lever to control women utterly: requiring all women to submit to marriage to a man or the sponsorship of a male relative by age thirty, in order to be eligible for freedoms as basic as employment. When Josephine was a teen her mother vanished, tainting her daughter by association; fourteen years later, she’s presumed dead. Now twenty-eight, Josephine is feeling increasing pressure to marry when a version of her mother’s will is found that leaves her a large bequest—but in order to claim it, she must visit an island that only appears once every seven years. There, she may find all she has been seeking and more. I was especially gripped by Giddings’ descriptions of the museum where Josephine works, full of dreamlike, vividly imagined art created by witches. The Return, by Rachel Harrison Four women gather for a girls’ trip in a super-hip, highly secluded inn to celebrate the mysterious return of one of their number: Julie, back after two years gone, without any apparent memory of where she has been. Things are a little awkward—they haven’t been together in a long time, their friendship dynamics are uneven. Not to mention the fact that Julie is skinny and stinking and craving raw meat. Fresh meat. Things degrade from there in a disgusting fashion, featuring Harrison’s usual excellent character building and funny, sharp dialogue. This is a friendship story to soothe your ego if you’ve ever lived through a less than perfect reunion. White Horse, by Erika T. Wurth Kari is an urban Native who lives a small life of well-worn pleasures: Stephen King, heavy metal, hanging out with her cousin, Debby—when she’s able to escape her needy and manipulative husband—and regular visits to local bar White Horse. She has long believed her mother left her and her father when she was just a kid. But when touching a bracelet that belonged to her mother makes her experience visions of her young mother in obvious pain, she’s forced to reexamine what she’s been told about her own past. Dogged by persistent visions, Kari sets off on a literal and figurative journey to finally face the demons that dog her. Shark Heart, by Emily Habeck This book doesn’t exactly hit the brief, yet the disappearance on which it centers may be the most haunting on this list: the vanishing in plain sight of newlywed Wren’s beloved husband, whose humanity and physical body are slowly mutating into the rageful simplicity and terrifying form of a great white shark. Habeck’s debut is set in a world that looks like ours, with one mind-bending difference: humans can be stricken with a whole array of transformative animal mutations, changing them into creatures ranging from deep-sea predators to birds. Behind the seeming bombast of the premise—man turns into shark!—is a gorgeous, tender, and heart-wrenching tale, focused less on the fantastical than it is on Wren: a woman who has already watched her mother disappear into the fog of mental illness, and must now discover again who she in the wake of losing the person she loves most. An absolute stunner of a book. *** View the full article
  28. Seems things can be fun in Tijuana, Mexico – TJ to the initiated – but things can also go very, very wrong. Of course a popular destination being right on the US-Mexico border, with two million people, a population seriously swelled by sojourning day trippers and US college students looking for adventure plus a few DEA agents and cross-border migrants waiting for their chance to head north. Home to the infamous Tijuana Cartel of course, nobody will be surprised to know Tijuana is a narcotics smuggling centre. The drug wars were known for their super violent turf battles between 2007 and 2010. Homicides peaked in 2010 – when 844 people were killed. In May 2022, it was reported that Tijuana had the highest homicide rate in the world at 138 per 100,000 inhabitants per annum. A seriously deadly statistic to contemplate. So often in Crime and the City we write about crime fiction set in places that are ordinarily perfectly safe and where you could leave your front door open. Not this time. This edition of Crime and the City comes from a city where the balance swings the other way. Nobody who regularly reads CrimeReads needs to be told that in Raymond Chandler’s The Long Goodbye (1953) Philip Marlowe meets Terry Lennox, a drunk with scars on one side of his face. Then one night Lennox turns up at Marlowe’s place, in trouble and needing a ride to Tijuana. Marlowe agrees as long as Lennox does not tell him any details of why he is running. Of course it gets more complicated. In Laurence Osborne’s Chandler reboot Only to Sleep (2018), a 72-year-old Marlowe opts for retirement down the road from Tijuana in Baja. By chance it happens that author Mark Rogers lives in Baja California, too, from where he writes the Tijuana Noir anthology series. Rogers’s Tijuana is dark, super dark. It’s hard to work out quite what order they come in, just that they come thick and fast (and all seem to be dated 2022!). TJ99 introduces Rafe, a 99er (apparently a colloquial term for unemployed people in the United States) who, with his Mexican-born wife Paloma, ditches economically struggling Southern California behind and make a new life in Tijuana. All is fine and dandy until he gets sucked into the Tijuana underworld of drug cartels and they come from him and his family. In Mockingbird Josh’s Mexican wife Raquel has vanished prompting a journey through Tijuana’s underbelly of sex trafficking, drugs, murder, and corruption. Other books in the series that are particularly revealing of Tijuana include Black Velvet where a struggling young writer ends up in the vicious dogfighting pits of Tijuana and Iron Star where a Haitian immigrant swaps the chaos of Port-au-Prince for the crime-ridden streets of Tijuana. A few other Tijuana-set crime novels… Leigh K Hunt’s Tijuana Nights (2014) sees McKenna Carmichael miss her flight, watching her plane blow up mid-air, and end up stuck in Mexico. Somehow she’s managed to get on the wrong side of the El Diablo Cartel. A novel is a globe trotting series featuring (and I quote the publicist’s blurb here….) McKenna Carmichael – ‘a reclusive historian turned sexpot’! Carl Vonderau’s Saving Myles (2023) features Wade, a respected banker in La Jolla and his estranged wife, Fiona, who have a problem with their son Myles. He’s a drug addict and he’s headed to Tijuana and gotten himself kidnapped. Now Wade and Fiona, with no help from the FBI, must raise the ransom (and perhaps sell their souls) and deal with a Tijuana cartel. Kem Nunn’s Tijuana Straits (2004) involves surfer and ex-convict Fahey offering shelter to a young Mexican woman who barely survived an attack on her life. Turns out she’s a labor activist fighting against exploitative foreign factory owners in the Tijuana maquiladoras on the border. The dark side of NAFTA. Space here for a short plea. Unfortunately the Mexican detective fiction writer Juan Hernandez Luna died tragically young in 2010. He twice won the Dashiell Hammett prize in 1997 and 2007 for the detective novels Tabaco para el Puma (Tobacco for the Puma) and Cadaver de Ciudad (City Corpse). While he has been partially translated his 1998 novel Tijuana Dream remains only available in Spanish. It’s the story of Antonio Zepeda, recently divorced and bored at his job, who takes a trip from Mexico City to Tijuana to unwind. A chance encounter there with a man named Nick starts the beginning of a series of events that will change his life for good. It really should be translated into English. The Tijuana-born poet and novelist Luis Alberto Urrea has described Luis Humberto Crosthwaite as ‘Tijuana’s greatest literary son’. Crosthwaite, along with fellow Tijuana writing legend Bobby Byrd and his son John William Byrd put together the anthology Puro Border: Dispatches, Snapshots, & Graffiti from La Frontera (2003). Great writing from both sides of the border, plus photographs, corridas, newspaper clips and facts revealing life en la frontera. Mexican contributors include Juan Villoro, Eduardo Antonio Parra, Julian Herbert, Julian Cardona, and David Ojeda. Writers north of the line include Charles Bowden, Luis Urrea, Robert Draper, Cecilia Balli, Gary Nabhan and Doug Peacock. And finally, as we don’t get to mention him nearly enough in this column, a Joseph Wambaugh classic. Wambaugh of course is best known for his LA set policier novels (he is the son of a Pittsburgh cop and served for 14 years with the LAPD). His writing is characterised by great plots, dark humor and crazy anecdotal incidents to emphasize the psychological peril inherent in modern urban police work. And he’s pretty critical of the police high command in the USA. His 1984 non-fiction book Lines and Shadows is a fascinating tale of San Diego cops – the Border Crime Task Force – taking on the Tijuana underworld. As Wambaugh wrote – ‘The bandits were no fools. They lived in Tijuana but operated on the American side where it was safe. Tijuana lawmen can be very unpleasant, as the bandits well knew.’ The story moves about, back and forth, across the border and stands, perhaps, as a testament to America’s long running an seemingly never ending – progressing or advancing – war on drugs along the border. And of course that war defines Tijuana and so much crime writing set in the city. View the full article
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