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Completely blown away by the polish and depth of your writing, Natasha. 

The brutal honesty in the line "I kept my eyes to the ground to hide my shame in a father made notorious for not saving his baby girl." hit me quite hard. As did the chapter title, "Undertow", embedded as part of a heart-wrecking metaphor in the second-to-last sentence, which brilliantly sets up the fact you never went to see Jackie after the accident. Such a powerful, vivid statement about a young person's reaction to the chaos of being raised by a clinically schizophrenic parent.

I absolutely want to

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